After a year of silence and peace, Jack Apple and her partner Rarity are thrust once again into a trial that tests them to their limits. Going from their home and across the sea, they may find that their true foe sat among them the entire time.
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Phewwww..... tension is GONE! You had me so worried there >~< so glad they made it out okay, and good on Jack to understand that even if she lost the fight, it was better to keep everyone alive.
Now I still have to say I feel like we are only half way through the story xD all things considered..... you didn't even address Chrysallis and whatever she was up to and who she may be working for in here at all, but you did put it in here as a plant :P or is that payoff in the Gilda story?
wow.... the Norfolk seal on the room... Jack thinking of everyone else to keep them safe.... I liked it. Great story here, hate to see it winding down, though. please say ya got more than just one chapter left for us, please!
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I'd argue a little against that. Considering I've mentioned the field twice alongside the poison earlier in the story, I felt it made sense for a payoff with that, not to mention that being more anti magic was something Jack was established to be ever since Will's training in the first one alongside finishing off Dmitri. Preptime or not, she wouldn't be able to even touch Luna, since she is far more of a martial prowess master, versus Celestia relying a bit more on spells.
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More of a payoff in Gilda's story, which will (thankfully) release far quicker than this one did, as I'm already about a quarter finished with it and will probably post it before fully ending it, due to having a really good outline I can abide by and keep my ducks in a row on. I mostly included it in this to showcase that it's a sister fiction that occurs more or less concurrent with what happens in this one, and both Chrysilis and Tirek serve some plot in both.
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Sorry pal, but you're getting one more chapter releasing in just a few, and then you'll get a conclusion to the overall arc with Gilda's perspective, which will release in fairly short order.
Perhaps my favorite part of this chapter is the subtle Easter egg with Celestia's scabbard. After all, it was Excalibur's sheath that kept Arthur safe from harm.
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I'm glad you noticed that. It's a small thing, but I wanted it to be something noticeable to people somewhat familiar with Arthurian tales.
Jack’s All-folk Killstreak: 2
Even if that iteam could be used for good the fact she was willing to hurt or even kill one of the nation's hunters and a friend just proves to me that she was not worthy of it