After a year of silence and peace, Jack Apple and her partner Rarity are thrust once again into a trial that tests them to their limits. Going from their home and across the sea, they may find that their true foe sat among them the entire time.
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Man, that was INTENSE!! But go Rares! Saving Jack with a teleportation spell!! Woo!! Hopefully they'll have some time to recuperate. Hehe xD
AWESOME chapter.... just wanted to say how much i enjoy your stories... The Laughing Shadow was the first story on this site i had ever read and ive been hooked on Rarijack and humanized fics since... was completely stoked when i seen this sequel and have been checkin for updates every chance i get. GREAT WORK and cant wait for more!
Epic fight, and wonderfully paced. I hope Celestia takes the outcome to heart; her people can stand on their own if given the chance.
Probably not, but at least it's one more siege engine lined up against the palisades of her messiah complex.
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We'll see. Hopefully they'll have some downtime, though.
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Glad to hear it! Love hearing people enjoying my stuff, and don't worry, next chapter in a tick.
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Well, kind of hard to not have a messiah complex when you're borderline OP.