After a year of silence and peace, Jack Apple and her partner Rarity are thrust once again into a trial that tests them to their limits. Going from their home and across the sea, they may find that their true foe sat among them the entire time.
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Always nice to see Spike supporting his sister, to say nothing of seemingly impossible Crusader shenanigans. The dance should provide plenty of opportunity for further developments, especially if Twila follows Spike's advice.
Amazing chapter! I think Rarity in a suit looks surprisingly... dapper. Or a bit more eye catching than in a dress, maybe that‘s because it‘s not something you would expect her to wear.
One thing that was a little confusing to me, was that Twila suggested Gilda and Dash as potential crushes. I thought that they came together again, at the end of TLS, after Dash saved her? I think that you like to write these things subtle, not so in-your-face. But I think that TwiDash would be adorable.
Edit:You mean Celestia right?
Considering I know Spike is talking about Celestia, I'm not sure how Twi was being so dense! XD
Also.... do I detect Gilda and Chylene as a thing!? Ooooh that'd be interesting and different than Gilda with Dash!
Also role reversal for Jack and Rares for outfits is a fun thing too! :3 really fun stuff so far Merc! Though I imagine we are only building up for mayhem!
It has my interest, which is saying a lot since I've been growing further from the fandom in general. Please do not despair and give up on this story, it has potential! Let's see what is in store of us with the latest adventures from this world
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Yep, you kind of kicked me in the tail and got me moving again on it
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You're probably thinking of the Fool's Gold series, the more modern setting story
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Well, hope it lives up to expectations. AJ being brow beat by the kind of dual roles she now fills is something I think just came very naturally due to the circumstances.
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Don't worry, ain't giving up on it. It's a different beast with a different purpose compared to the first, but hopefully still enjoyable enough.