After a year of silence and peace, Jack Apple and her partner Rarity are thrust once again into a trial that tests them to their limits. Going from their home and across the sea, they may find that their true foe sat among them the entire time.
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Before I even read anything, the title...
*snorts* Dik-tat.
Aww shit.
I should read this.
But should probably re-read TLS first.
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You fell into my trap!
Omg I can't wait!!! Will read later today for me!
Well this is interesting to say the least. I do wonder tho why does it seem like they are treating Spike like he is 12 or something? I mean I wont go into the rant that any Spike fan goes into, since I have made them all before lol, but it just seem like he doesn't really get treated like a equal but more like a child being teased by a carrot of affection than someone on equal footing with our favorite pink terror.I just wonder will this relationship even work out? I mean she already stated that the way he looks is a big issue for her and he is going to look like that for a long while. He is far more mature than his looks give off just like his age so he may only be able to put up with this for so long and who knows how it will effect Diane if this falls through.
Its great to read something from you again, and can I be honest with you?
Even though I didnt really like the concept of Laughing Shadow at first, after reading it to the end a few months back, I can say it grew quite a bit on me. It isnt one of my favorites of your work, but thats because the setting isnt really my cup of tea, but what drew me in was your great writing style. I‘m going to watch the sequel and it looks really great! Keep up the amazing work.
Edit: Something that I really liked, even though it was a small thing, was that Pinkie is wearing boxers to bed. It was something of a small little treat to see that she is wearing something that, unfortunately, is almost always stereotyped as something that only female characters wear, when they are stereotyped as masculine AND only then when they are are also gay (Like Dash). So, I‘m sorry if I made you uncomfortable with focusing on something like this, but its the small things sometimes, that make me love a fanfic.
Welp! You got me interested and excited again! Love your world! :3
Woo hoo there is a sequel!!!!
It's been a while since I read the prequel, but it's all coming back to me in these chapters. Very eagerly looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here.
So glad you’ve come back to this story! Looking forward to more.
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Glad you all are enjoying it so far!
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No kidding, been forever since I posted anything. Hopefully I'll keep a shipshape upload schedule now
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Yeah, thought it made a bit of sense for her to sometimes get dressed up in that instead. Figure Rarity would be the only one that would consistently wear
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Well, in this universe he isn't 12, but he is someone that has grow up alongside the others. And if you've ever known someone for years of your life and they're younger, you tend to see them as younger. Sure, he's more mature now and everything, but it's still a bit hard to shake that stigma totally, and a part of their relationship is trying to see how he is as a grown man in some degree.
Yaaassss. I was just about to suggest you start posting. Love this, as always.
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I wouldn't have even gotten it posted without your help. So thanks for everything you've done, pal. I really appreciate it.
And I'll need to get the Gilda one ready soon™ too, since it goes hand in hand with it. Maybe I'll stop being lazy eventually.
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No but srsly, that Gilda fic is gonna turn out fantastic. I’ll be watching it and editing behind you. Uh, after I finish with this one. I’m on like... chapter 19 or 20 now? Looks clean so far.
Well shit. Only a few hours after I post a review of TLS, we get a sequel.
Really like all the character work and setups, especially Applejack's. It's rare to see the hero's burden, (for lack of a better term), explored like this. Makes for such a powerful and interesting character.
am so ready for this adventure