After a year of silence and peace, Jack Apple and her partner Rarity are thrust once again into a trial that tests them to their limits. Going from their home and across the sea, they may find that their true foe sat among them the entire time.
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Oooooooh!! What did Jack make!? The mysteryyyyyy!!! -eagerly awaits next chapter-
Celestia's conviction is too strong to be shaken by those she sees as her children, whether or not she acknowledges that view. This might well be what the assassination was meant to accomplish, shaking up one of the few people who could track down the Grail enough to do so.
As for Applejack's concoction... yeah, there's no way that's going to help.
First sentence.
Does this sound better?
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That second one for sure, I'll get that swapped over. The first one works for the kind of terseness I was shooting for