After a year of silence and peace, Jack Apple and her partner Rarity are thrust once again into a trial that tests them to their limits. Going from their home and across the sea, they may find that their true foe sat among them the entire time.
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Great chapter, but one thing I really don’t like is how Jack treats Rarity. Like she‘s a cute little cinnamon roll, too good for this world, too pure. And how she trains Pinkie and Rarity differently, in that Jack treats Rarity as if she is too delicate to even get a paper cut. You could argue that she only does it because she is her wife, but Rarity can very well handle herself and it would be counterproductive if Jack would use kids gloves on her, doesn’t she realise this?
And I loved the scene with Celestia and the little kid, she was too cute with him, and I find it cute that we got to see such a carefree and adorable side of her . I hope we get to see a scene between Twila and Lew where she tells him about Celestia.
One question I have is: I thought this world is a lot more tolerating than it once was, so does Lew even know that his sister is bisexual? I assume that he, as her big brother, would be the first to know something like that. Or is Celestia Twilas first crush on a woman and that the reason why he doesn‘t know?
How AJ treats Rarity and Pinkie is great, really raising the stakes. All this calm before the storm.
Dueling seal is terrifying, btw. Am quite relieved there was no accidents, but even then, ouch. Never thought of how it feels for Rarity having to see Jack go through stuff like that until this chapter. Hit hard. Was interesting because it's easy to stomach (relatively) seeing Jack go through danger for Rarity, but seeing it in reverse? Some hard perspective and self reflection there. So good.
Last scene was super amusing, love those setups. Celestia so sly.
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