I expected Fancy Pants’s accent to be a bit more posh.

Ooh cyborg legs? I wonder how he lost his original legs. Keep it up man!

Nice work, hope the next chapter comes out soon.

Nice chp indeed, cyborg legs tho? Surprising but not unwelcome. Tho I assume because he is part mechanical is why the animatronics won't try to kill him. Also I feel sorry for those past guards. Also I'd like if the next chp didn't take too long

Interesting .... think this one will go in my tracking folder.

an interesting development, now I have to go back and look at his names to see more of what this might mean.

not a bad first night

(Contains breast expatiation when there is clop.)

Do you mean Expansion?

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God Dammit! I can't do anything right. thanks for the pointer.

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You are most welcome.

I kinda hate doing this considering all the other comments, but...

Spike moved to ponyville a while ago and is running sort on bits.

...shouldn't this be "and is running short on bits." seeing as the phrase "running short" is another way off saying you're running out of whatever it is you're running short on, e.g "you're running short on patience for these comments pointing out typos and errors."

Also if you need an editor I'll be happy to help, just don't expect it to go too fast. I tend to be fairly slow, and not that great with my time management.

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One: Thanks for pointing that out.

Two: You Can! That's great! Please be my editor!

Also don't worry about me going fast. I don't have a lot of time to write and when I do I don't really write a lot.
But if your going to be my editor for this story, I have to warn you, Their will be clop in the next chapter. If you do somehow decide to help me, Then, thank you SO Much!

Also as of writing this comment, the next chapter is nowhere near ready to be looked at. so you would't need to start right away.

Well, it seems that Spike handled his task pretty well.

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Please have more!! Oh, a good story idea. SPike helps Derpy out of kindness, but the two end up falling in love. ITs a clop. And maybe a similar story with Spike and Zecora.

Well color me interested. :)

So Spike's bionic??

Uh... cyborg legs?

Silly as it maybe, You have my interest with FNAFs but now you have my attention.

Breast expansion, Hehehee~

I'm like the story.

Just going to let you know however, that if this takes too long in updating I'm unfavoring.

Cannot stand lazy authors.

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alright, the next chapter should be coming out soon.

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Appreciate it. :)

This is already taking too long.

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Then go ahead and unfavorite...

I can only do so much

like the story so far, only one question though.. when next chap

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Honestly, I don't know myself... Currently I have 2,680 words to it now and its only half way done. I hope to get it out in about a week or two, but no promises. I'm sorry

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dont apologize, you can take your time

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Thanks!

Nice.

Spike suddenly stopped, he had accidentally jammed his foot into his dresser. He felt no pain, but there was now a huge dent in the dresser now. "Dam." Spike sighed to himself. He opened the dresser to get out clothes and got out a purple jacket and green pants.

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LOL. I was wondering when someone would point that out.

Grammar.