Apostrophes are important. Your title is missing one. As it is, your title grammatically reads "Twilight (subject) Sparkles (verb) Pizza (object)". Unless Twilight does, in fact, sparkle pizza--and one is left at a loss as to what that might entail--then you need an apostrophe.
8506767 It's actually another FNAF fan-made game called Five Nights in Anime instead of having the jumpscare from the actual FNAF, the animatronics are female and their jumpscare is just either showing the guard their butts or breasts and you lose (most likely to the guard having sex with them) and go to YouTube and type in Five Nights in Anime and watch and you find out what I mean
An interesting concept, especially in equating Pinkie to Foxy rather than Rainbow. Nice touch with Sugarcube Corner. Will keep an eye on this, hope to see progress soon. Keep up the good work.
Good start. Cant wait for more.
Now this is horrifying and great to read. Perfect story for the month of Halloween or Nightmare Night.
You probably mean restaurant.
Can't wait to see what you do with this story looks great
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*FacePalms* Yea let me fix that.
looking forward to next chapter.
Fnaf fandom plus MLP fandom= ?
Apostrophes are important. Your title is missing one. As it is, your title grammatically reads "Twilight (subject) Sparkles (verb) Pizza (object)". Unless Twilight does, in fact, sparkle pizza--and one is left at a loss as to what that might entail--then you need an apostrophe.
Very interesting. I can't wait to see how this plays out.
Stop right there.
Get an editor.
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Thank you both for your advice. I am currently working on getting an editor
Just like FNAF anime
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There's an anime?
Oh god it's five nights at Freddy's. And judging how there's the sex tag and what Fancy Pants said, things are definitely going to get bad.
Questions
Is spike gonna get down and dirty with animatronics?
Is that beating up and entire school a reference to family guy?
Also I was wondering when someone would make something like this, thanks. Oh and cool name I feel like Draco or Drake are a bit over used.
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Yes.
Yes.
Thanks for liking the story. I thought of the name because of an event that happens later in the story.
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Bad? Or spectacular?
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It's a mixture of both.
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It's actually another FNAF fan-made game called Five Nights in Anime instead of having the jumpscare from the actual FNAF, the animatronics are female and their jumpscare is just either showing the guard their butts or breasts and you lose (most likely to the guard having sex with them) and go to YouTube and type in Five Nights in Anime and watch and you find out what I mean
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They suffocate the guard with their boobs when they catch you.
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Yeah at least he got to do the motorboat Bow chicka bow wow
...Snu-Snu.
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Okay, sorry I ever asked.
It seems like an original name.
An interesting concept, especially in equating Pinkie to Foxy rather than Rainbow. Nice touch with Sugarcube Corner.
Will keep an eye on this, hope to see progress soon.
Keep up the good work.
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Thanks a lot!
Dude, you need a proofreader. Spellcheck only helps so much.
Why the hell did he just said that.