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Oh, so he won't have to wear his armor at school then? Neat. I wonder if it is unusual for colts or stallions to bite back when assaulted in those circumstances?
Oh shit this is back from the dead
Mate, give it a day. Let your story sit a day, do some editing, you'll be golden
this is worrying to all hell, future equestria is screwed if even fillies are thinking they're surperior to males to the point that they look for any reason to cause violence to stallions.
He said her mom was wrong but she took it as he saying her mom was stupid then slapped him.
My new theory is some mare decided to screw over stallions by de-evolving them just to prove her superiority. Just for shits and giggles let's make the mysterious mare an alicorn.
Hahaha, keep up the good work my friend!
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HEY! Yeah it has been a while, how has it been? I have been enjoying this here story since it has started being updated again. Much enjoyment has been had.
Glad to see you are still around, I have been reading mostly, not any writing sadly, just been kinda out of it. Maybe i'm depressed, meh, But atleast I have wonderful stories to keep my mind occupied.
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True enough! And I wasnt a huge fan of this story originally, and I believe I have my own theory as to what's going on, and my inner editor and writer is screaming at the typos, but it's very interesting regardless.
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had this theory since shortly before we met corner stone. but ur right, i theorized that some mare went and purposely dumbed down the stallions and made mares bipedal. there is no logical excuse for females or males of any gender to diverge from the same evolutionary path as their gender counterpart by sheer magnitudes like this. and it had to happen after corner stones 'incident'... im thinking the kings mare(queen) simply cause there's a cliche of a kings wife who is supportive, but takes the kings ambition and ramps it up only for it to benefit her somehow. im also disappointed in twilight, and the princesses. sure they grew up with things being the way they are, but celestia said it was science. if that were true, she would know females of her species shouldn't have been so dramatically different for any reason.
also keep in mind corner stones own words, about how 'he must have given the go ahead to light the kilns' without warning. something about that seems odd too. only ones who would have authority to give that order, i would assume- is king and queen.
i feel so bad for corner stone, she has to go thru what luna did, only multiplied by several magnitudes. nearly cried when she tried paying with her wheel. its all she knows, but its of no use to her- just imagine if that was you, and you spent the tie to make it for that purpose...
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Yeah there are quite a few word errors or typos but you are right about the story being interesting. I find as long as the story is readable and has a good tale to weave then I'll most likely enjoy it. At least for a while. There has been a few stories I've read that have good storylines however that I just stopped reading after a while because either the story got to bland or just did something that I found really annoying and just don't for a plot device.. Also at times, the story I started was just far to long and I just give up halfway through it. Like "The Diaries of a Madman." good story, great spelling and grammar, Did something I found annoying around chapter 150 or something along with them lines. Never been back since. I still keep track of it... But its getting to the point of being on par with One Piece... LOL
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Probably wearing armor below the uniform, most likely a lighter varient so he isn't encumbered by it
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You kidding? Sunbutt's been having the palace armorers working day and night to craft even more powerfully enchanted armor designed to suit the school dress code when sewn into the proper robes.
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Huh didn't think of that, well they're probably making him a school uniform that is just an illusion on top of some light, but strong, armour (changed armor to armour for localization (im in USA))
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...The US spells it armor.
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Yes, I used the UK/Canada/everywhere else spelling
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But you just said you were in the US...
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I am confusion
Ah yes, "I'm going to tell your mother" is the most devastating weapon indeed.
Thanks for the update!
I get the impression that this alicorn mare is like 9' tall or something