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This is no mine, it's a tomb.
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No, no it’s not a Tomb. It’s a fucking mass grave! Think about it! A fire so hot that it melted OBSIDIAN! Who do we know that can make that hot of a fire?
By the Goddess Celestia, what did you do?!
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It was a reference.
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I knew that
Interesting, for all its grandeur, they were essentially traveling down the shaft of an incinerator
But the corpses remain...
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More likely it was the unicorns before her that controlled the sun.
Damn, you really gotten a long way from the first few chapter were it started out as more of a fetish story, now we have an actual plot for the protagonist to try and solves when his care takers aren't looking at least. I think this is a great addition to the story which adds a lot more depths to it. It is interesting to see how well Gold seems to be accommodated the the crown, if might just be because of his royal pedigree but it's nice that the mares aren't always cast in a negative light all the times, in spite of their biases. I do like learning about his relations with Twilight Velvet and learning that she was his wet nurse too. The part that she describe's how see sees the bonding experience of breast feeding with males and learning that she did take the conscious choice of keeping Shining intact. Nice to see that Gold feels that he has more sibling. I wonder how is Cobbler doing on his end and how was his relation with him? Can't wait to see more of the mystery of this chamber.
I wonder how the courtship between stallions and mares work in this work do they just pick them each other and that is it or is their some instinctive ritual their have to follow. I wonder if stallions have been know to fight over mares, could be somewhat valid, if callous, reason to geld males for prolonged bachelors who don't have a herd of their own and are aggressively frustrated?
Oh i'm liking this... It will be interesting to see what they discover. Was is a ritual? Perhaps a magical event of some kind? Was it natural or pony made? Or maybe someone else did it to put a stop to something that could have done horrible things to others?
Ah the mystery of it all.... Keep up the writing your doing wonderfully....
I was just thinking... I bet Velvet could put other princesses in the corner too when they act up or do something wrong... I'd totally enjoy that... LOL
Gold coast, the alicorn of getting shit done, still haven't come up with a good quip or his bell-like cutie mark yet.