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A devout brony (pegasister) and an unswerving pony hater find themselves in Equestria, amid Queen Chrysalis' renewed plot to conquer Equestria. Needless to say, matters go out of hand and betrayals abound. How far can someone (or somepony) go to forgive another who has used him or her to destroy something or someone that he or she holds dear? And can those with hate and vengeance in their hearts change their ways?

I know this isn't my best work, and I hope the description doesn't confuse anyone. The original is on my deviantArt page.

There is swearing in parts, specifically only chapter 3 (Re-envisioned) at the moment. I'll give fair warning, but I imagine most of you have seen worse anyway.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 12 )

Love it and I can't wait for the next part

905802
Thanks for the offer...but I think I've got all the clothes I need for now.

907416
Glad you like it! I'll try to get another chapter up in the next few days.

913666 :pinkiegasp: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss: :twilightsmile: YOU RECEIVE MANY RAINBOW KISSES FOR YOUR BOUNTIFUL GIFT! :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss:

916296
Thanks! :pinkiehappy: I may have the next chapter done tomorrow, we'll see. And many rainbow kisses back to you! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

916438 Tom is my favourite character JUST because he's a dick xD

919093 Sorry I haven't updated yet. Been working on a drawing and had a few things going on here and there, but I'll have the next part as soon as possible. And I agree, Tom's a fun character to write about.

919093 Okay, Chapter 4 is finally up! :pinkiehappy: Sorry for the extra-long wait. :twilightsheepish: By the way, it will be a while before the next chapter, since I'm going to be gone for surgery in the next few days.

934209 the most fun characters are the ones that conflict with absolutely everything. i like it so far, will read chapter 5 tomorrow. waaaay to late right now to consider going on.:rainbowderp:

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Oh, very nice. Glad you're enjoying it :pinkiehappy:. I actually almost have the next chapter finished. Just need to revise a little. And I'll get to yours soon too. I seem to be in a fanfiction mood, both reading and writing. I'm questioning the sense in what I'm writing now...taking a 3/4 page trollfic (not mine, but a fellow FG member's) and completely revamping it into a full story with character development and background :derpytongue2:. I'm curious myself as to where it's going to go. Might actually be more on the dark side, with some humor here and there, considering my source.

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