I have a dog, he is evil, I love him
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Seriously?
wow not one like
*Sigh*
Why am i proofreading this...
BECAUSE I LOVE PROOFREADING!
Error in title, should be "The Cake's Special Treats"
AAAAAAAAH
Pinkie Pie woke up or the day on the rock farm for the last time. She smiled as she saw her sisters sleeping in their beds.
Also, I'm pretty sure that Ponyville is a town and not a city
Choose is present tense, chose is past tense.
Her dark red mane fell in her mouth, causing her to cringe and spit it out.
Pinkie said COMMA hoping to strike up a conversation
The rest is just a heaping pile of wrong tense and need of commas.
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Nice first story
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Thank you! I will be sure to edit it.