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Kavidun


Trans* writer who almost never writes.

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Twilight Sparkle knew her potential, but she could never perform a basic spell. When she doesn't get into magic school after Starlight Glimmer successfully stops the Sonic Rainboom, she sees no reason to go on, and decides she wants revenge on all the other fillies and colts, who had no problem making friends or achieving the level of education they deserve.

A tragedy ensues.

But what happens after a tragedy? What about her parents?

Follow Twilight Velvet on her journey, dealing with trauma, guilt, and other emotions that stem from a tragedy. Meanwhile, Starlight Glimmer tries to deal with the consequences of her actions, feeling a similar guilt.

Twilight Velvet's story is heavily inspired by We Need To Talk About Kevin.
Starlight Glimmer's story is heavily inspired by the episode Turn Left of Doctor Who.
Other influences include Elephant by Gus Van Sant, Bowling for Columbine, and research of school shootings.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

I wish you the best of luck getting more upvotes than downvotes...

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Eh, this isn't a fic about a school shooting, it's a fic about the aftermath and psychological effect on the family of the perpetrator. Hopefully people don't see "school shooting" and downvote because they think it's edgy. I'm trying to tell a serious story.

8248903
Well your short description kinda gives that idea....

8248913
If people are voting without reading the first chapter, that's up to them.

Off to an interesting start. I look forward to tracking this fic.

Robert's got a quick hand...............

This could be interesting.

well I hope you continue writing this

This is really good! I can not wait to see were this will good. It is similar to the story I wrote called “Code Red”. It might be a helpful reference for when you write the epilogue.

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I’ve got bad news... the writer can’t continue the story

Comment posted by DanielBenner302020 deleted Jun 13th, 2023
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