With Germany suffering defeat of The Great War; the whole nation is suddenly ripped off the face of the world and thrown into a new one. How will Equis react to a huge, industrial, Empire. Will Germany seek peace, or will they start another war?
When asked what i thought: I found that the new chapter opens many new advances for the story. Like my comment said it seems to be pushing Germany to one side or the other. On one hand they can get the supplies needed form equestria while not really being able to expand or they could join the griffins whom likely will allow them to expand in a war against equestria, however the griffins just want the technology and would not be as trustworthy as equestria(also possibly of supplies questionable ?). (Next depends if they fully withdrew their army back to Germany.) The Germans may want to expand but I think this could be a great chance to flush out Hindenburg and his roll with the Kaiser having him give input about their position. Eather way puts Germany against another nation. Now if they hadn't fully withdrawn their army they may not even be able to fight yet do to lack of manpower and can take many years to repopulate before they can expand.
8216630 just saying that there population must be incredibly low then if like 700 dead is a really big loss that kingdom shouldnt go to war in the first place or be annexed by a bigger more powerful one that can take better care of the land and if their population is really that incredibly small it really makes no sense to have a military at all as there isnt enugh man power and a nation needs an economy after all nations like bhutan and nepal have next to military too for example as its just not worth it
8216725 What if a dark princess threatens the survival of living beings in Equis by making the night eternal? It would be too cold to survive and plant life would die out with lacks of sunlight. So, fighting would be a priority even with a low population. I even wrote that Equestria's population back then was around the twenty thousands. And se even said that the war took tens of thousands of lives in total. So every Battle took its toll until the final battle which ended it
8217163 it can still be ended without a single battle ever happening ever sun tzu said the true art of war is to break your enemies resisistance without fighting
Germany can do anything again.Like building tanks and start the modernization.And increase the troops alot.ALOT.And I hopre Germany will side with Equestria
Great concept, but it has been ruined with the anthro tag. Seriously why the heck do peoples want to huminze the ponies so badly? what is wrong in keeping them all the way they are? We already have enough humans as it is...here in our own world and even popular media.
Also a human version of MLP already exist as well, why not just used that one instead of making them human with horse heads.
Again great concept, but personally I hate anthro. Still wish you the best of luck.
hiya! thanks for following me and if possible could you help me with some stuff? im new to this website but i have read your stories before and i must say the rampage one and the german one are my fav ones but anyway if you have a discord lemme know and we will talk on there less you private msg me cause idk how to do that here XD but keep up the good work with the stories!
The guard nodded and my captain looked toward the leader, "First, where are we"?
He leader took a moment, "You're in the planet Equis. More specifically, a new land that merged in with Equestria, and most likely several other countries".
The guard nodded and my captain looked toward the leader "First, where are we?"
The leader took a moment, "You're on the planet Equis. More specifically, your land merged with the borders of Equestria, and most likely several other nations."
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Interesting...
another great chapter from you..... hope you continue this quality of writing ;P
Quite intriguing, I am going to assume that this meeting is going to be cut short or is going to be reveal what modern warfare losses are.
why making such a huge deal abozut 1000 soldiers its just 1000 and not a miliion or so
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Becasue in this timezone, Equestia hasn't made a huge milestone in populations. So losing a thousand would be a lot for her nation
When asked what i thought:
I found that the new chapter opens many new advances for the story. Like my comment said it seems to be pushing Germany to one side or the other. On one hand they can get the supplies needed form equestria while not really being able to expand or they could join the griffins whom likely will allow them to expand in a war against equestria, however the griffins just want the technology and would not be as trustworthy as equestria(also possibly of supplies questionable ?). (Next depends if they fully withdrew their army back to Germany.) The Germans may want to expand but I think this could be a great chance to flush out Hindenburg and his roll with the Kaiser having him give input about their position. Eather way puts Germany against another nation. Now if they hadn't fully withdrawn their army they may not even be able to fight yet do to lack of manpower and can take many years to repopulate before they can expand.
Good story soo far, nice touch with changing timelines.
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Thanks, I thought it'd be a nice way to show the brutality of the Equestrians, the Dragons, and the Gryphons
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you are making it sound like there population was only a couple thousand
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Then what number would you make it?
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just saying that there population must be incredibly low then if like 700 dead is a really big loss that kingdom shouldnt go to war in the first place or be annexed by a bigger more powerful one that can take better care of the land and if their population is really that incredibly small it really makes no sense to have a military at all as there isnt enugh man power and a nation needs an economy after all nations like bhutan and nepal have next to military too for example as its just not worth it
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What if a dark princess threatens the survival of living beings in Equis by making the night eternal? It would be too cold to survive and plant life would die out with lacks of sunlight. So, fighting would be a priority even with a low population. I even wrote that Equestria's population back then was around the twenty thousands. And se even said that the war took tens of thousands of lives in total. So every Battle took its toll until the final battle which ended it
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assasins,a 1vs1 between the princesses r something less conventional a good leader can end a battle before it even happened
8216818 except when the enemy also has an army
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it can still be ended without a single battle ever happening ever sun tzu said the true art of war is to break your enemies resisistance without fighting
Germany can do anything again.Like building tanks and start the modernization.And increase the troops alot.ALOT.And I hopre Germany will side with Equestria
Great concept, but it has been ruined with the anthro tag. Seriously why the heck do peoples want to huminze the ponies so badly? what is wrong in keeping them all the way they are? We already have enough humans as it is...here in our own world and even popular media.
Also a human version of MLP already exist as well, why not just used that one instead of making them human with horse heads.
Again great concept, but personally I hate anthro. Still wish you the best of luck.
I have a feeling Germany is going to start a new great war on Equis by invading those colonies...
Look forward to the next chapter mein comataden
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Make more, I want to see what happens next
nazi Germany in Equestria sounds like a better story. but oh well better start reading.
hiya! thanks for following me and if possible could you help me with some stuff? im new to this website but i have read your stories before and i must say the rampage one and the german one are my fav ones but anyway if you have a discord lemme know and we will talk on there less you private msg me cause idk how to do that here XD but keep up the good work with the stories!
All grammar marks come before the closing-quotes. Word change is frankly irrelevant.
Hmph, it's a bummer that the last post was in June. I hope against hope that this isn't dead. This year feels like nothing new is coming out.
I think you mean unharmed
Next chapter anytime soon? I really enjoy this story even if it has several spelling/grammar mistakes here and there
I do believe you mean to say “completely unharmed” instead of “completely harmed”.
*laughs in Verdun*
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Hey, me too.
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