Scootaloo tells the Apple Family of what happened to her before she ended up in Ponyville, and how she got there. Events in the story take place before "Call of the Cutie" and lead up to it.
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awwww
ending was rushed a little
NEXT CHAPTERZ??????
I liked the story, though it seemed sort of rushed, there were a few grammar mistakes, and the ending was done slightly poorly.
First they're outside, then suddenly they're inside? WHAT?! Seriously you need to go over this and fix the pacing something serious.
I'll read it again when you can confirm you've fixed these issues.
Hey guys, it's the co-author here, trying my best to sound like the subordinate and not the guy in charge (Don't hate me, Rala-kun!
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Anyhow, 881677 and 881644 and 881568, I looked the document over and proposed a few changes, and the main author'll get them as soon as he's up (it's still early where he's at). I did my best to fix pacing issues and the like, and proposed a more detailed ending. I'm not sure how long it'll take, but work has (technically) been started on delivering you guys a better story. Thanks so much for reading, and your comments are always appreciated
Thanks for clearing that up Mr. Devil
Stories been updated everypony!
I hope you all like the changes that were made 
Scoot: I'll do any thing for my hero
Dash: anything?
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That may have turned the potential sequal into a clopfic. Not sure yet.
Glad to inspire
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Talking to the Co-Author about it, want to make sure I have his approval to corrupt the story
Or you could just make another fanfic but that's a side note I'm glad to corrupt
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Planned on it
Awwwwww Yeeeeeeeaaaaa
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Corruption approved. Let's make a sick, twisted mockery of something beautiful.
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All right!
this is so touching.
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Glad ya liked it!
AWWWWW!!!
I'm wondering if Pinkie Pie has ever thought of taking up being Mare-do-Well again. She seems to have a natural knack for these things, doesn't she?
this was so good