What he needs is somethign with the same taste and flavour, but with no bulk and no calories, that or anti flavour from everyone else, Eventually the occasional snack of maid, guard, personal assistant, ambassadorial staff etc would wean her off Pascal all together?

Sweet! New chapter so soon! Love every second of this!

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i'm not going on a six day sprint like last time

7964239 Good, no need to burn yourself out... Just sit back and enjoy writing it when you have the time or what have you... lol I'll sit back and enjoy the ride...

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You have the right idea, no need to rush chapters out like as if the end of the world's coming. (and probably would never come)
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I agree with you on the fact of enjoying of what you're writing, if you don't, it'd end up feeling like a boring chore, and that's no fun at all. Though I'll also be enjoying where this story goes as well.

Another excellent chapter, as always with your works.:D

Princess Luna - Cognitive-Behavioral Therapist

Goddammit, I'm trying to do homework.

While I'm happy to see another chapter so soon, I will say that I very much enjoyed the more sedate pace of updates, and certainly won't be knocking down your door begging for a fast update. Especially since this story is much less 'ticking clock' and much more 'let's deliver on all those long-term goals we teased in the first story'.

Dang that was fast, nice chapter. Hope he can find away to either get celestia off his seed like an addict and or settle with himself being a normal human, it's a good thing he has those imperfections to balance out his perfections, or else he really would be that normal stallion who doesnt really do anything out of what their society deems as "Normal".

Anyways nice chapter, good work man!

7964276 Agreed!

"Seems rather obvious to me,"

No kidding.
I really like the continuation of the moral quandary.
Pascal's fretting about the continuity of the show reminds me of Thomas from my story, Horse People Go Naked. It's nice to see Luna giving therapy to a guy who's job I imagine to be a super therapist. Seriously. He could set himself up as the uber marriage counselor, just telling couples to get over their issues and remember they love each other, and it would happen. Be good money doing good work.

7964519 It's not foolproof, and his power could still have damaging consequences in this scenario.

For example, what if one set of clients are an abusive marriage with the abuser using counseling as a tool to discourage the victim? A simple "just work it out, focus on your love" would cause more harm than good.

As someone who read the first story for the plot, not the clop, my initial reaction was, "why is there a sequel? The first story wrapped everything up, and everyone rode off into the sunset, on a partner of their choice."

As of this second chapter, I see that Pascal and Celestia are still pretty borked in the head, and there's still plenty to resolve.

I completely forgot that Pascal is either a Brony or from a universe that has the MLP shows.

Oh, Universal Acceptance finally got a sequel? Yes!

In all seriousness, let's be honest; Universal Acceptance was one of those few clop stories where I actually didn't like most of the clop/fetish content involved, but kept reading it because the story was so damn compelling, and had a pretty fair amount of substance to it. Assuming the sequel is the same way, I'm sure to love this one, too.

This chapter was interesting. It seems like you’re trying to get Pascal to come to terms with the reprehensible and immoral things that he did in the first book while he was trying to survive as a human. However, all that this chapter seems to be doing for him is baby him and have him believe that everything is going to be ok because he’s not a bad guy. But that couldn’t be further from the truth. I’m not saying he’s a bad guy. Just that ignoring his problems isn’t the way.

We can say that he did all those immoral things in order to stay human but let's face it. The fact that he went through the trouble to make Twilight and a bunch of other ponies give him an abnormally bigger dick and ball sack through magical surgery tells us that he doesn't really care that much about staying human if he was willing to mutilate himself like that. At that point, he just wanted to give himself self gratification through sex. If he let himself transform into a stallion, he would've had the means to do that whenever he wanted to. Not to mention that at the end of the first book, it showed us that becoming one with his artificially applied destiny wouldn’t have taken away his power to manipulate others. His argument to stay human at this point is nothing more than an attempt to feel normal. And that “normal” is filled with self loathing. Something that would’ve had no roots to them if he allowed himself to turn into a pony built for epic sex. But he’s still human so now he has to get through Equestrian life the hard way. By accepting what he was doing in the past and move on from there knowing he can be better. But babying him and telling him that he has nothing to worry about is only going to make things worse for him mentally.

Normally I would posting my "Why" opinions down her but what I have to say pretty much covers the entire chapter to some extent. So I’ll just PM you what I have to say so I don’t bother anyone else who wants to post something short. Fair warning, it’s long. So if you don’t feel like reading it then you don’t have to. You don't even need to respond to it either. And no, I’m not expecting that anything I say will change anything that’s in this chapter. I just think what I have to say deserves a chance to be considered and if any of it stands out to you then maybe, in some small way, what I said could possibly help shape potential chapters in relation to Pascal’s character. I like Pascal’s character, so that’s why I feel I have to be tough but fair when I talk about both him and this chapter.

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yeah, i'm not reading that whole PM because 1) all it's gonna do is make me feel bad when i was trying to explore a topic that's kinda personal and 2) your perceptions and my intentions regarding this fiction are two very slightly different things and we can argue about them all day and we'll both be technically right as reader and writer

but i did skim it, and after it and your comment here, you did make me realize that there was a line i had intended to put in about how it's not about believing you're always right but about how the first step to improving is changing what you tell yourself to find a more healthy level of self-reflection and that's kinda what the whole point of this chapter was actually supposed to be about, not just handwaving some of the bigger moral issues

so congratulations, you made an edit happen

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My point to the PM wasn’t to make you feel bad and I definitely wasn’t expecting you to change anything in this chapter, but you did say that you at least skimmed what I said. And even though you didn’t have to read it at all, I thank you for at least doing that much.

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I don't see how turning into a pony externally is going to help him short of mind controlling himself.

I've been looking forward to this sequel quite a bit. I'm kinda curious if Pascal will get that hypnotist job for the wonderbolts, and how he will meet back up with his prior crew of sexual delinquents.

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It's hard when, through your writing, you put a bit of yourself out there to be judged by complete strangers. It tends to make one defensive, even moreso than they would be normally.

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And the award for “Randomness Out of Nowhere” goes to...

Going back and rereading this whole thing (again) and I just realized something: Luna made Pascal's inner monologue vocal, so she is aware of it. She actually stopped his inner monologue when it wasn't vocal.

Luna potentially heard Pascal commenting on the fact that Equestria is part of a TV show where he's from.

I got a season 5 (or final season) vibe of a show that ends with "Jack."

And so the self-fulfilling prophecy is fulfilled. Just like you saw with the Tantabus. And we have punished ourselves for nothing.

Right in the fucking feels, man. Right in the fucking feels. I see you're starting off strong and not pulling any punches. Respect.

Also, thank you, because for some reason I didn't realize this before: while I don't deserve to call myself something I'm not in terms of "better than I really am", the same is true for the negativity I have inside. Because... I'm not all of these things my subconscious self-depreciation playback tape is telling me, either, and I don't deserve this constant putting-down I subject myself to.

Heh. More insightful gems in a magical porno fantasy story. Again. I should be used to it by now.