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alright look, in this house, we gotta earn our Twi clop
even if that means splitting what was supposed to be one chapter into three because getting to the point where Twi's okay with it with Pascal organically turns out to be a real bitch
Cadance: My sister-in-law has finally accept her own kinkiness! -sniff- I am so proud of her.
Twilight: H-Ha-How did you know I have er... kink?
Cadance: Twilight, whenever we went to the library, pony anatomy was always one of the first book you took from the shelves.
This has to be the realest fucking paragraph.
After so many chapters of Twilicunt, this chapter has actually managed to make me feel (some) sympathy for her in a credible way. Bravo!
I'm surprised Pascal never thought the reason might have something to do with her being an Alicorn rather than a normal pony. She's closer to the Alpha version of what ponies were designed for. The fact that she was upgraded from basic stock would explain quite well why nothing fits together.
But I guess the "having a kink" explanation is less dark, so, why not.
Roll credits...DING
You know for a clop fic this story has some real truth bombs, I mean you know how to build up them just skewer my heart with those feels man.
More kinks than a self coiling hosepipe.
The great thing about backstories, is you get to write them in the future as you get more information.
Whicj means Pascal can be writing the history of the current day as he goes along, because until he does so, its Uncertain what it actually was.
The greater the deviation needed though, the more power to twist the intervening world line that far.
Theres going to be a Lot of power with Celestia and crew.
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Stop spoiling the next chapter.
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I like this story more because it deals with the actual mental hangups and reasons. If my proclivities come out, this is one of the stories I'll be referencing to explain the differences between adult fiction, porn, and smut and my enjoyment of them.
This was a very deep chapter. I appreciate and understand why you went the way you did with all that stuff between Twilight and Pascal. This was some truly heavy stuff to wrap my head around here. A lot of your story came the whole way around to this chapter. This was some real good writing and you went so deep with it, you hit the bottom of the Mariana Trench and you're not even finished yet! I can't wait to see how you get the rest of this ball rolling!
Another amazing chapter, as usual.:D
no kink shaming when Pasky's around
Was that from Equestria Girls or MLP? I can't seem to find that scene when she says that line
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it's a callback to the first UA
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Ah yes. It’s been awhile since I have read the first one. I knew I heard that line somewhere before
So, I marathoned this series over the course of a few days, and I have to say, I'm impressed. The amount of character interaction, introspection, and development is impressive for the amount of sexy content. Pascal's personal problems persist in a realistic way, while also showing enough improvement that it isn't unbearable. Resentment and forgiveness have been dealt with similarly. The plot hooked me hard enough to keep me reading for hours into the night. And while I don't share a number of fetishes with Pascal, it didn't really mess with my suspension of disbelief. Considering the worldbuilding includes hyper-proportioned anthro ponies, that is no small feat.
Coming into the sequel, I was wondering how Pascal's power would be used, now that he is not driven by necessity to violate norms. While he has reigned in his usage, there is still enough trial and error to keep things interesting. I am especially looking forward to what Moondancer has done with it, once this part of Celestia's therapy is concluded. And while I feel like Celestia's all-day session will be relatively straightforward in a narrative sense, I am also looking forward to seeing how you weave together the catharsis and support of such a varied cast of characters.
In short, you should be proud, and keep up the good work.
... aaaand there it is. The crux of the problem. Princess Sparkle found things about herself that she didn't like... and so got angry at the person who showed it to her. Painfully mundane, in every way.
And while I saw it coming a mile away, I love it how the characters just keep thinking "off-screen". It's a great reminder that, aside from all of the craziness Pascal gets up to, Equestria just keeps on going in the background, that it's not forgotten.
Damn, now I really want the next few chapters to be up, right now! :D Fun Times with Twilight? I'm down, no questions asked.
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I know, right? The story is gripping and engaging entirely on its own merits, the sex (though arguably also an important part of the story) feels a lot like a "bonus" to all that.
Damn, I love me some adult stories, man. And this is just that - and again, I don't mean the sex. The "adultness" of the story is in the problems it touches, the topics it brings up, and how it deals with them (hell, this chapter alone is a perfect example!).
Sex you can find in about any male fantasy (and there's loads of those up here as well, on Fimfiction) - but dredging up some really deep and painful issues, and then dealing with them in a sensible, mature manner - that's not something you'll find often.
I also love this particular characterization of Twilight. Her intelligence shines through in all things she does, sure, but at every turn it's driven home just how much of a normal mare she really is beyond that. She may be a hero, and possibly a genius, but she's still just a pony, and there are still things she's terrible at - like interpersonal relationships, or understanding herself and her own motivations. I really like that.
Hell, not that many stories that actually make their characters find something new like that - and then deal with it - in general.
Heh... it's kind of funny, isn't it? Such depth and maturity couldn't possibly be contained in a clopfic of all things, yeah? :D Heh. I learned that lesson with Katawa Shoujo. ;]
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I don't think being an alicorn has much to do with it. To be honest, I more expect this to be sort of a "moderator" position, if nothing else. If we consider Celestia and Luna to be the "primary avatars" for the Masters - the two points of interaction that'd carry out their will down the line, sort of an "admin interface" if you will - then that'd be one of their tools for keeping order, wouldn't it? The ability to nominate "moderators" that'd assist them in their day-to-day tasks.
The fact that, as it stands, its meaning is entirely different... doesn't really change the mechanism, or the rationale behind it. In fact, in a sense... that's one of the things they seem to be using pretty much as it was designed, and for its intended purpose: Twilight proved herself capable, so she got responsibilities. ;]
Besides... I feel that making it "because she's an alicorn now" would be too dark, even for this work. I mean, that'd be a whole ten fucking layers of "oh fuck" - I can't even begin to imagine how Celestia would feel about her little "gift", if it meant that she basically unwittingly cursed two ponies she really cares about...
It never fails to entertain how you can turn a story about fetishes into something so smart-sounding.
I'm impressed by how the context makes this fetish make sense for Twilight to have.
Dealing with other ponies was always a weakness of hers until getting thrown together with the other bearers, so it fits that she would fantasize about being able to do something without the social aspect being a factor.
So after rereading this whole thing again (and again and again. Uh. I kinda have a habit of coming back to this series whenever I'm feeling off), I took notice of the letter that Luna sent to Pascal:
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After looking at that, I kinda wonder if what happened in this chapter is gonna come back to bite him in the ass. Or at the very least if Luna is going to give him very stern talking-to.
You still kicking OP?
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Right
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I think the intent is different enough for it to not be an issue. The point this time isn't to restrict what he can do, but to bring it under more conscious control so that he doesn't do something bad with his power without even knowing it.
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I happen to agree here. He's giving up (or, perhaps I should say switching off, considering he could bring his full power to bear at any point!) the parts he doesn't directly control - the meta- bits of it, where things happen whether he likes them to or not. I can understand that at the very least. Besides, I feel that he could just say "You're exempt from that exemption for the next 5 minutes" and it'd be as if it never happened.
Hell, he could probably throw something like "Any and all exemptions to my powers do not apply to those Equestria considers enemies or outright evil." - just in case he needed full powers over Tirek or Chrysalis without any warning. The outcome of those would depend greatly on what the country (or world) as a whole considered "bad", or maybe what the magic of Harmony did. I mean, it already knows what's out of harmony via the Elements, so...
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So... Could you say "All exceptions applied to normality disappear when applied to beings that threaten harmony"? And if it works on discord, just add "except for Discord" and that's it... What a good way to avoid the acceptance nerf