An Alicorn, really? I was hoping on the him being a Pegasus. I wouldn't want anyone to be dumped with princess duty's. Looking forward to seeing who the tutor is.
Ben, why did you chose to let go the wonderful opportunity to be known from now and forever as... Princess Big Ben?
I kinda know the ending I want now. The sequel bait of he (should we say she already? he is more practical, I guess) getting married to Rainbow. In a shotgun wedding because skittle butt just got a bun in Ben's oven
Given that Ben's a reasonably bright cookie with a decent grasp of history, I'm surprised abdication was never brought up even in discussion.
Granted, having claims to a throne but no royal guards or clout is historically a quick way to have an 'accident,' but it seems unlikely in a nation as laidback as Equestria.
Would have been quite amusing to see a whole room of ponies have a mental breakdown on hearing: "Say, how about I take my share of ultimate power, and use it to become a beach-bunny for the next ten millenia?"
8331207 well given the popularity of the name for that particular genderbend, I think it would be Bluebelle in this case or something along those lines.
Hah, I was hoping this would happen! Might Ben's ascension have something to do with the fact he got to sample Twilight's and Celestia's seed during his transformation? I can't wait to see what the actual coronation ceremony is going to be like. I imagine Celestia dubbing Ben on the shoulders with her horsecock instead of a sword. Then the other princesses taking their turns doing the same.
Luna is the one I'm betting on being the tutor. She's only fairly recently become FULLY familiar with the necessary etiquette and so on, and as such has the freshest memories of what would be the ABSOLUTE minimum of what's necessary, given she would have had to go through almost the exact same thing herself.
Man I was originally in this for the glorious heap llads of futa porn, but now seeing an interesting plot that seems like it'll be a sexier version of "TD becomes an alicorn princess" seems awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
I noticed that the only pony in the entire Main 6 that noticed the one thing about Ben that nopony else did was Applejack witch brings up a good question Will chapter 9 see Ben getting a Cutiemark and what would His/her special talent be? As for the tutor I think Ms. Harshwhinny as well but I will wait and hold until the tutor arrives and Sexy Hijinks with Cadence and most likely Gleaming as well I have no doubt that She's left out of the fun Cadence gets into. Also I see a ship sailing here Dashie and the new princess Ben or whatever name Ben decides to go with for her final transformation. So got a few things happening Ben's an Alicorn Princess by Royal Decree She lacks a Cutiemark has a crash course coming up in Law and other things and such more likely ben is still not completely finished the fact the lack of a cutiemark is still a concern and the fact that everypony once it was pointed out kept staring at her flanks was annoying ben Good Job Looking forward to the next chapters.
Yeah, I'm just gonna stop that line of speculation right here. This may be a clop story with nudist ponies, but it's not an overly-sexualized Equestria. Nothing wrong with that type of setting, just not what I'm going for.
Sex, while generally more liberal than on Earth, is still seen as something done in private (though nopony'd bat an eye if someone walked in on them mid-coitus). Public sex acts, while not illegal, are generally frowned upon.
Conversely, prostitution is not only legal but also a fairly respectable profession. Similair to a massage therapist.
And of course there's always room for 'unofficial' traditions when it comes to welcoming a new princess...
Well, yeah. Just because the official ceremony is perfectly "normal", doesn't mean that Celestia and Luna don't have their own little private traditions.
This was an AMAZING chapter! I did not see Ben becoming an alicorn. I thought he was going to be a Pegasus, considering that his grandfather flew B52's, but this, THIS is the greatest. It gave me excited chills when I was reading. Great job so far and keep up the great work!!
“Twi, I don’t think-” ... I had to tread carefully here, lest I incur the wrath of the librarian. “What I meant was... wouldn’t it be better if we waited until Princess Celestia got back to us. I mean, she is the expert here, after all.”
There, diplomacy. You're learning already.
Boooo! Stick it to the man! Buck convention! Keep your name. Wear a suit of some sort (if you prefer) instead of a dress. Be proud of your former human-maledom. Flaunt it and represent. Former human and proud! If nothing else, maybe it'll help when contact with the native world is made (or am I confusing stories?).
So... I lost this chapter among my other updates and only recently noticed it again.
I must say I like the alicorn angle and see some very interesting results from this. Hope to see some awesome noble smack down, be it intentional, accidental or simply oblivious actions.
Granted, were I in her position I’d find the whole thing fucking hilarious. As it is, though, I was just plain mortified. Luckily for me Sunset Shimmer had my back. She walked up behind Dash and Gibbs’d her.
Wait, Canterlot Palace isn't the headquarters of the Leagon of Doom?! I wonder what Ben’s new name and cutie mark are going to be?
So alicorn huh, good choice as it's leads to so much sweet,sweet chaos (and fun)
new chapter kind of sad no sexy bits here
My guess is that it's Miss Harshwhinny who is being called in.
Oh sweet goddess, who is the tutor? I suddenly have the suspicion that it is Moondancer.
Okay show of hands, who else saw alicorn Ben coming?
An Alicorn, really? I was hoping on the him being a Pegasus. I wouldn't want anyone to be dumped with princess duty's. Looking forward to seeing who the tutor is.
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Not me, that's for sure. I was aiming for pegasus when I started. Things just kinda evolved this way.
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Let us hope he finds both soon. Otherwise a shit storm is incoming.
Definitely not feeling this chapter.
Just seems like a bunch of my least liked cliches and pet peeves tossed together.
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I thought as much, I remember you putting an authors note saying you wouldn't make him/her an alicorn.
Ben, why did you chose to let go the wonderful opportunity to be known from now and forever as... Princess Big Ben?
I kinda know the ending I want now. The sequel bait of he (should we say she already? he is more practical, I guess) getting married to Rainbow. In a shotgun wedding because skittle butt just got a bun in Ben's oven
Well I hate to be that guy but why didn't Ben just say no to being a princess
It is getting interesting.
At first I thought her tutor would be Harshwhinny, but probably not.
I'll bet the tutor is Miss Harshwhinny
Disappointed he didn't end up with a [Stand] but whatever.
Okay, the last sentence make me chill to my bone. Good job, Celestia.
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CHAOS! GLORIOUS CHAOS!!!
MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
...No Discord emoticon?! What a sham!
This was a awesome and funny read it had me LOTF I loved it
I just have to say it. It's like an Alicorn bargain basement sale!
Everyone's saying the tutor will be Harshwhinny, but I offer an alternative guess: Blueblood (or your local equivalent)
Given that Ben's a reasonably bright cookie with a decent grasp of history, I'm surprised abdication was never brought up even in discussion.
Granted, having claims to a throne but no royal guards or clout is historically a quick way to have an 'accident,' but it seems unlikely in a nation as laidback as Equestria.
Would have been quite amusing to see a whole room of ponies have a mental breakdown on hearing: "Say, how about I take my share of ultimate power, and use it to become a beach-bunny for the next ten millenia?"
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well given the popularity of the name for that particular genderbend, I think it would be Bluebelle in this case or something along those lines.
Hah, I was hoping this would happen! Might Ben's ascension have something to do with the fact he got to sample Twilight's and Celestia's seed during his transformation? I can't wait to see what the actual coronation ceremony is going to be like. I imagine Celestia dubbing Ben on the shoulders with her horsecock instead of a sword. Then the other princesses taking their turns doing the same.
Luna is the one I'm betting on being the tutor.
She's only fairly recently become FULLY familiar with the necessary etiquette and so on, and as such has the freshest memories of what would be the ABSOLUTE minimum of what's necessary, given she would have had to go through almost the exact same thing herself.
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Well it's not Discord emoticon but here, have Discord approved
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Man I was originally in this for the glorious heap llads of futa porn, but now seeing an interesting plot that seems like it'll be a sexier version of "TD becomes an alicorn princess" seems awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
I noticed that the only pony in the entire Main 6 that noticed the one thing about Ben that nopony else did was Applejack witch brings up a good question Will chapter 9 see Ben getting a Cutiemark and what would His/her special talent be? As for the tutor I think Ms. Harshwhinny as well but I will wait and hold until the tutor arrives and Sexy Hijinks with Cadence and most likely Gleaming as well I have no doubt that She's left out of the fun Cadence gets into. Also I see a ship sailing here Dashie and the new princess Ben or whatever name Ben decides to go with for her final transformation. So got a few things happening Ben's an Alicorn Princess by Royal Decree She lacks a Cutiemark has a crash course coming up in Law and other things and such more likely ben is still not completely finished the fact the lack of a cutiemark is still a concern and the fact that everypony once it was pointed out kept staring at her flanks was annoying ben Good Job Looking forward to the next chapters.
I actually hope it is Chrysalis
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Maybe the coronation ceremony involves a bukake... this is a porn story afterall...
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Yeah, I'm just gonna stop that line of speculation right here. This may be a clop story with nudist ponies, but it's not an overly-sexualized Equestria. Nothing wrong with that type of setting, just not what I'm going for.
Sex, while generally more liberal than on Earth, is still seen as something done in private (though nopony'd bat an eye if someone walked in on them mid-coitus). Public sex acts, while not illegal, are generally frowned upon.
Conversely, prostitution is not only legal but also a fairly respectable profession. Similair to a massage therapist.
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Ahaha, no problem... I still expect some aspect of the coronation to be absurd and different from what we were shown in the show.
And of course there's always room for 'unofficial' traditions when it comes to welcoming a new princess...
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Well, yeah. Just because the official ceremony is perfectly "normal", doesn't mean that Celestia and Luna don't have their own little private traditions.
This was an AMAZING chapter! I did not see Ben becoming an alicorn. I thought he was going to be a Pegasus, considering that his grandfather flew B52's, but this, THIS is the greatest. It gave me excited chills when I was reading. Great job so far and keep up the great work!!
One of those "I guess"es doesn't need to be there and should be removed so that line doesn't come off as clunky.
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I think the biggest clue was when they basicly described ben as a sex god.
Knock it of, Dinozzo!
XD Glad im not the only one that watches NCIS. Love the story, can't wait for more. :)
There, diplomacy. You're learning already.
Boooo! Stick it to the man! Buck convention! Keep your name. Wear a suit of some sort (if you prefer) instead of a dress. Be proud of your former human-maledom. Flaunt it and represent. Former human and proud!
If nothing else, maybe it'll help when contact with the native world is made (or am I confusing stories?).
cant wait for more
So... I lost this chapter among my other updates and only recently noticed it again.
I must say I like the alicorn angle and see some very interesting results from this. Hope to see some awesome noble smack down, be it intentional, accidental or simply oblivious actions.
When is more?
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Slowly being worked on. Hurricane Harvey threw me off my rhythm a bit but I'm still writing
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Yay
This wait is killing me...
umm i have a importatnt question will there be kids if so are they gonna be hybrids or ponies
Called it when they gave Ben all those looks. And as much as I hate Starlight she had the second best reaction.
NCIS are you a fan?! I think so!