As I went to shut the door, another, much mousier looking mare entered behind the first, dragging a large bit of luggage behind her. It was on wheels, but it still looked heavy as hell.
One question, if Platinum (or anypony) doesn't usually wear clothes (Ben did not describe any of her wear, so I just assumed she did not wear one). Then what is the need for the big luggage?
I missed this, nice to see you back. Interesting to see equestria can still throw our hero out on a loop. Also, what's that about not being female? Does the concept of gender not hold water to ponies?
Now though, I could eat all those things I missed out on. Like hay bacon. Which is awesome. Doesn't taste quite like regular bacon, though. It's more like turkey bacon, to be honest. Still, it tasted great, and that's all that mattered.
just finished watching a DWK episode so now im hearing this in his voice XD
It's like the show. Most ponies don't wear clothes on an everyday basis, but they still have clothing for formal occasions, and the rich use clothing as a status symbol, although even then clothes still generally leave the chest and genitals bare. Fashion in Equestria is all about enhancing and accentuating physical features, not covering them up.
Technically, ponies here are not female in a biological sense, even though they do outwardly express physical features generally associated with femininity. Biologically they are hermaphrodites. Culturally, most ponies generally identify as female, but not always (Bulk Biceps, Big Mac, Gleaming Shield to some extent)
Here's hoping that Ben bends Platinum over and plows her hard enough the unicorn can't walk straight for a week. Maybe it'll be the start of actual friendship after they have hot and heavy sex.
It's a enjoyable read, Gyvon.
Ben's sexual awkwardness when the new cast members were introduced had me sympathizing and made it feel more than just porn since unwanted boners are a thing that happens in life - not porn land.
So incest isn't taboo in the slightest in Equestria? Interesting. I wonder if they ever go all the way with it. I could imagine e.g. Flitter and Cloudchaser getting married and raising a deliciously incestuous family. Perhaps in some family trees incest is the norm and they only ever reproduce with their own siblings...
Seems like you're going through a porn checklist with this fic, which kind of ruins immersion for me. Can you slip more mundane sex in at times? It would make it more believable, and I imagine that (despite him finding female sex to be great), Ben would still like to play the male, from time to time.
"Yeah, one of my ancestors was appointed as governor of the colony of Georgia a few centuries ago," I said.
My direct maternal great great grandfather was the first Secretary of State of the Confederacy, Robert Toombs. Apparently there's an entire county in Georgia named after the drunken asshole.
Gleaming coughed at theat statement, and I thought I overheard her mumble something about a "Chrysalis" while doing so. What butterflys had to do with sex, I did not know. Nor did I really want to find out at the time either.
"I respectfully disagree," Cadence said. "I could tell at a glance that you're not making any progress at all, and it's frustrating you to no end. I hate to see you frustrated, Platy. It turns you into a complete bitch."
Glad to see that your rebuilding and continuing this story.
Also. First :)
One question, if Platinum (or anypony) doesn't usually wear clothes (Ben did not describe any of her wear, so I just assumed she did not wear one). Then what is the need for the big luggage?
cn → can
sw → saw
I missed this, nice to see you back. Interesting to see equestria can still throw our hero out on a loop. Also, what's that about not being female? Does the concept of gender not hold water to ponies?
just finished watching a DWK episode so now im hearing this in his voice XD
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It's like the show. Most ponies don't wear clothes on an everyday basis, but they still have clothing for formal occasions, and the rich use clothing as a status symbol, although even then clothes still generally leave the chest and genitals bare. Fashion in Equestria is all about enhancing and accentuating physical features, not covering them up.
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Technically, ponies here are not female in a biological sense, even though they do outwardly express physical features generally associated with femininity. Biologically they are hermaphrodites. Culturally, most ponies generally identify as female, but not always (Bulk Biceps, Big Mac, Gleaming Shield to some extent)
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God dammit, thanks to you when i read that part i can't get DWK's voice out of my head
That was a awesome /epic read I loved it all I hope join her herd .can't wait to see what happens next.
Should probably move that "l".
Do you even levitate, bro?!
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Formal wear.
.... I wonder if ponies can get away with wearing halter tops for breasts support and micro miniskirts or hotpants?
You know for interacting with pesky humans, (that's been hinted at later in the story?)
Also pockets.... I want to see Ben complain about the lack of pockets..
I wonder how many arguments Twilight sided with Platinum...regardless if Platinum started them.
Here's hoping that Ben bends Platinum over and plows her hard enough the unicorn can't walk straight for a week. Maybe it'll be the start of actual friendship after they have hot and heavy sex.
It's a enjoyable read, Gyvon.
Ben's sexual awkwardness when the new cast members were introduced had me sympathizing and made it feel more than just porn since unwanted boners are a thing that happens in life - not porn land.
Her real name Is princess Bluebelle
So incest isn't taboo in the slightest in Equestria? Interesting. I wonder if they ever go all the way with it. I could imagine e.g. Flitter and Cloudchaser getting married and raising a deliciously incestuous family. Perhaps in some family trees incest is the norm and they only ever reproduce with their own siblings...
Seems like you're going through a porn checklist with this fic, which kind of ruins immersion for me. Can you slip more mundane sex in at times? It would make it more believable, and I imagine that (despite him finding female sex to be great), Ben would still like to play the male, from time to time.
Good fic, either way.
My direct maternal great great grandfather was the first Secretary of State of the Confederacy, Robert Toombs. Apparently there's an entire county in Georgia named after the drunken asshole.
Also, HOORAY! UPDATE!
Llaughed my ass off on that
more please
When is next chapter?
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Being worked on, rest assured. Currently about halfway through the next chapter.
the incest thing was the only thing I disliked about this chapter.
Yes just yes
Both of you, have a Snickers. Now.