Attention. Story not to be continued. Thanks the commenters. ^^ goodbye
I know my life is not important. There are many more important ponies to talk to. But can you at least listen to me for a few minutes. I need to let it out. My life. My curse. My family. My destiny. I got a big dark side. And I want to kill it out of me, but I can’t. My name is Jennifer SweetPlum . I’m a curse, and this is my story so far.
The story will contain violence, supsense and other things. This is only focusing Jennifer. Other stories will be posted
This was inspired by the song Dark side by Kelly Clarkson
Chapters (2)
I'M COUNTING ON YOU!
"I remember my mom and dad, only how they look. Not what they did. Not what they sound like. Just their looks. They were both soldiers. My brother, sister, and I were scared if they never came back. They always came back, promising a gift from each trip. It would always be a toy, a piece of jewelry, or maybe a rare artifact. It was pretty cool. It was around the time they came home the last time when I saw them the last time. It was summer. Everyone was happy. Everyone wanted to hug mom and dad. But… I would have never guessed that explosion that was behind the couch."
"But… I would have never guessed that explosion that was behind the couch."
"... behind the couch."
The hell?
D-d....do you have any idea what you've gotten yourself into? At all?
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There are literally thousands upon THOUSANDS of these stories all over the site. And let me tell you something, the good ones? They are gonna be damn better than yours.
Wow, you quit even though you can't get through constructive criticism?
Such a whiny baby, even he says that its better to read a Pepsi can than this story.
Just because there are thousands of these kinds of stories out there doesn't make this one automatically bad. At least give it a couple more chapters before passing your judgment on it