Alternate Ending
This is just a little thing that I wanted to do, and it may or may not link to a future story that I'm planning.
As he looked into those eyes a sudden feeling of dread was about to engulf him, Mr. Carnage didn't want to go. It wasn't because he wanted to stay as a pony or the fact that he wouldn't see this world again, it was because he was in love with Rainbow Dash.
He would never see her again, her beautiful smile, her incredible eyes, the taste of skittles in his mouth. He would even miss her flaws, when you also miss the worst parts of someone that's when you know that your in love with them and Carnage didn't want to lose her.
He could see Dash's eyes start to water as he felt himself about to leave. He looked at his hand and could see electric sparks randomly coming off of it. The sky above him was becoming cloudy by itself and in a split second he knew he was about to go.
This would be his last chance to say it so he mentally said fuck it and went for it, "Skitt... Rainbow Dash I want you to listen to me. I love you. I know that is a big thing to say especially because of the situation were in but I love you and I don't want to leave you. God I don't want to leave."
A small smile crept onto Dash's face as the lightning came down that would take Carnage away...
Carnage wasn't sure where he was right now, in fact he felt rather different. But different in a way that felt familiar, he got to his feet but found that he was on all fours... and that he had hooves again. Carnage looked over his now green body to see the hourglass cutie mark on his rump and to his surprise he no longer had a horn but a pair of lovely wings. He was a pony again.
He looked around his surroundings now to find himself at the edge of the Everfree forest and Rainbow Dash staring in shock in front of him. Nothing was said between the two lovers for what seemed like an eternity until Carnage finally worked up the courage to say something, "Well this is unex..."
He suddenly found himself pinned to the ground with Dash's lips locked on his.They stayed there for another eternity until Dash looked at him again with more tears in her eyes, "Tell me this is true Carnage, please tell me that this is all real."
"Yeah Skittles. I think this is all really happening."
She shot off of him and said, "But how? I thought..."
"Maybe this is my will, I really didn't want to go and this happened, honestly though I don't think we should question this."
Carnage walked up to her and brushed a bit of her mane out of her eyes, he leaned in for another kiss and said, "You know what... I can see this working. Right no time to waste we should go..."
Carnage attempted to fly with his new wings but ended up eating a load of dirt. Dash shook her head and walked up to her fallen coltfriend, "Having trouble? Here let me help you."
She picked him up and they held hooves, she flapped her wings and Carnage mimicked her movements and they slowly flew in the air, they shared another kiss and Dash whispered in his ear "Now lets get you home, I'm not going to waste any time this time round."
With Dash's guidance the pair flew home...
Epilogue
One year later Dash and Carnage would be married. Carnage worked small cases but because of Spike's influence murders were starting to occur again in Equestria but Carnage always wasted little time and caught any killers, he maintained a 100% success record.
Rainbow Dash around this time was finally accepted into the Wonderbolts by Soarin. However his motives were found to be alternative Dash rebuked any seduction attempts from him and eventually became the leader. She also settled her differences with Soarin who became her 2nd in command and a close friend.
After 2 years of marriage and being present for the wedding of Twilight and Laughing Stock the two welcomed a filly into the world. The called her Miss Carnage.
The End
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.....what the fook is this?
1318255 What do you mean its me.
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1318261 Its an alternate ending to this story, what's the confusion?
...I'm both confused and happy because of this ending... But mostly happy
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I think I now understand the issue. This is not the canon ending, I repeat this is an alternative one, in fact this was meant to be the original one but it got dropped, basically this is what would have happened if Carnage had somehow stayed with Dash in Equestria. Sorry for the confusion.
-Mr. Carnage
Intresting. It seems like a good premise for a story, i hope to see more added to it.
- ΠΡ
1318705 It will likely be a small sub-plot to the story if even that, if you want to see what I'm referring to here's a link to it, leave a comment to say what you think of the premise.
-Mr. Carnage
1341386 Hints to the sequel
there is only 1 thing i have wrong with this story. IT'S RATED TEEN! HOW IN THE WORLD IS IT RATED TEEN?!?! IT JUST BLOWS MY MIND!!!!!!! other then that though this was a well written fanfiction with few problems i have and those are usually nitpicks. i see a lot of talent in you and I know that sometime in the future you will be able to top this masterpiece.
1370181 Why shouldnt this be rated teen?
oh and its not over yet, theres more to come and thank you for the kind words
edit: by that I mean possible sequel from alternate ending.
1370295 i'ts over use of cussing is enough to make it mature in my book.
1370830 I see, i actually asked one of the moderators wehat they thought and they said it was still teen as long as I didnt get to words like c*** and only swear sparadocly
alright whatever. i'm gonna go read my little dashie a threequel......... why i'm telling u that beats me. i'm to lazy to take it out so i'll just leave it in.
1384638 Thanks for the fav and the feedback
1384745 God your one of the few people who got that.
everyday this story is shufflin then its another day there is good stories in the world
1423762 very good sir, can you figure out the other two though?
1429417 Rule Britannia!
1451480 lets see if you get the last one then.
1457469 So I hope you understand they were clues to the sequel. Well done buddy, kudos to you.
They lived a life of love...
3243520 This was like my first story and yeah I get the issues, but I keep it up here because I can look back on how much I've improved
3624926 Not suprised, first story I ever write and I leave here to remind myself how much I've improved.
4445902 thank you. I must confess there is a lot wrong with this fic in terms of grammar, and I'd probably change some things in it, but I appreciate. You should take a look at my more recent work if you like this.
Mr.Carnage sounds like a bad guy's name. Was this intentional?
4605060 explained later