After losing a good friend who will no longer remember him, an incident in the TARDIS causes the Doctor to get stranded in a parallel universe. Instead of just another parallel earth however, he finds himself in the world of Equestria where ponies rule. While the Doctor tries to get his head around the concept of magic, and Twilight sparkle tries to understand the TARDIS, a disaster occurs when the Doctor inadvertently reveals a terrible secret, and an old foe from the Doctor's past will try to take over Equestria. The Doctor and his knew found allies our the only ones who can save the day.
Chapters (17)
I am not sure how many human doctor crossovers there are on this site, maybe a few, maybe a lot, I am kinda new. At any rate, there are a few grammatical errors I noticed, such as you almost completely forget to capitalize most of your sentences. Other than that, I though it was a really good set-up. Looking forward to more.
you might wanna redo the description.
And don't worry if your story was already done once. There's a few dozen Doctor Whooves stories on this site, way too many for a sane reader to check one by one. Just keep writing and try to upgrade on your skills.
Well someone has already given me a dislike
probably for grammar which isn't even that bad, oh well got 5 likes to balance it out, hooray
871949 thanks I'll look over the story again and btw I love your picture
872152 also i see what i think you mean and i redid it, tell me if i didn't fix the problem you were mentioning
I...would most certainly recommend getting a couple of pre-readers to look over your story. You have some serious issues with grammar, and it is highly distracting and somewhat cringe-inducing for a Grammar Nazi like myself.
872293 are you offering?
872384
'Fraid not. Don't quite have the patience or the attention span to do it.
I would suggest maybe putting up a temporary chapter and a blog entry requesting pre-readers. This is a fairly large community, and I'm certain there are others out there that could do just as good a job, if not better, than myself.
This is something I highly recommend, I hate to see stories with such great promise hampered by simple things like spelling and grammar.
872463 Just a quick question, what is the biggest problem in the story?
872469
The grammar.
The most noticeable bit of that problem is your aversion to commas.
I fixed a number of the grammar problems guys, if you notice anymore don't just dislike, let me know and I will sort it.
-Mr. Carnage
How will the town of Ponyville react to the Doctor?
Not very well I would imagine
I have nothing better to do, I've got writers block trying to work on my own fic, but I'd gladly pre-read so that it's less, how did he put it? cringe inducing
Hell, I'd pre-read both stories.
885427 I think I'm fine now thank you for offering, unless you've noticed a load more grammar problems?
887987
A few, not horrible, but still noticeable to me at least, and I'm no where near as bad when it comes to being a grammer nazi as some of the people I've seen on this site. For example, It was impossible that the TARDIS was saying that it was completely fine yet it would not move. The other one I can't remember but it was in the other chapter. Nothing bad mind you, just a minor mistake.
Here's an extra long chapter, I had trouble writing this chapter so tell me what you think, enjoy!
he is not only a doctor of time he is the doctor of everything
946956 Your profile picture may be one of the greatest things that I have ever seen.
thanks
The Doctor is a Brony.
..............I'm alright with this.
948726
Am I the first to demand MOAR?
OP please deliver, I like this story and would like MOAR as soon as you can.
1016796 I will continue this story however I'm going to do two chapters of 'Friendship is murder' first, sorry
-Mr. Carnage
1016824
Friendship is... Murder?
Sounds like it ties into Cupcakes. I think I'll check it out.
1017497 It's actually a murder mystery story that I plan on making a series.
Good as always (though I believe I've said this before)
Looking good so far. I have to ask: at what point in Doctor Who does this take place?
1023709 Well I've said it twice in the first paragraph subtly and then out right state it in the bold section at the bottom but I will say it gain, this takes pretty much at the end of the tenth doctor's run and it's between the planet of the dead and the waters of mars, which I think was the easter special and the Halloween special respectively.
1023802
Ah, I didn't see that.
And subtle won't work for me since I've only ever seen the Ninth Doctor's season.
Anyway, looks good so far, I'll be tracking.
"I swear there's something off about that Vinyl Scratch I just can't put my finger on it…"
hoof not finger
your faithful student happydeath
1069111 Oh shit your right.
>>mr.carnage yeah i know but its ok it happens to the best of us
your fathiful student happydeath V.I.C (very important comenter)
Owww nice one Rainbow reaal nice... XD
Moooore?
1189294 Soon, very soon, if you like this story then check out the other one I'm writing with the Doctor, It's called the Bat, the the Doctor, the Rainbow & Mr. Carnage. check my page for it, I think you'll like it.
1191942
I think I passed by that one once. I'll check it out then
I love this story so far,
are you going to make more? 
1703003 You mean more chapters or more stories?
1706003 chapters.
1706011 Yes I will. The next chapter is currently being written and I will have it up by the end of the week.
Oh dear God. Please tell me that you think that David Tennant is best Doctor so I can love you
Apart from some writing issues, I relly like this story. You seem to have grasped the Doctor's personality quite well and I can't predict what Celestia found. Well played
1708174 10th Doctor is best Doctor.
Can you notify me on any issues that you find. That would be really helpful.
1712313 I love you
Well you have some punctuation problems, but apart from that I have nothing much to say. I'll tell you if I see something.
1713110
I'll keep an eye out.
Time Turner meeting The Doctor? Foreshadowing and paradox
And I love the Prince of Bel Air reference
1733306 Thanks for pointing that out and the bel air refrence was just something that randomly happened.
1733315 Accidental reference? Oh you are good
1733319 It was great, lol'd when I did it.
I've liked it thus far, though I was wondering if you would be open to me acting as your prereader? Your grammar isn't too bad but it could use a bit of cleaning up. Oh and btw, are the Daleks going to show up? if so then please please please make them spider Daleks! Daleks who used to be normal Daleks but re-adapted themselves for the new enviorment.
1739700 Maybe...