Little Sprite is a filly living in Ponyville but is sad, because she lives without knowing who her true parents are. She is avoided, and most fillies don't like her because she is an alicorn, and think that she should be living in Canterlot. Little Sprite seeks the answer
to her problems, and goes throughout a good amount of her life trying to find the answer.
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A review in the style of Stalin
What ever happened to the 1k word requirement?
The first paragraph is more or less unnecessary.
Billybob Joehenkins not a pony name unless I'm not getting a pun
Cheerilee isn't she Scoots's sister?
Isn't sugarcube corner the local sweets shop?
This whole thing need to be longer like way longer
You say in the summary that sprite is a alicorn but not in the story.
Over all I'd say 2/5
And please correct me If I am wrong.
It's Billybob Johankins
BillyBob Johankins is a name I told him to put in the story. we were silly
Alright Tyger. to answer your questions, Cheerilee is not Scoot's sister, but her teacher. The first paragraph is going to mean something later. There can be more than one sweets shops. I am still editing it so some info might be added to previous chapters later on (I will say so if it does so people can find it). it will be longer. As you can see i pretty much just started. The 1k word requirement is just the amount of words you must have for people to be able to read it once it's accepted. ( By the way Kagynski, I will fix Billybob's name.) -Skentrins javascript:smilie('
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The end of chapter three is only funny if you picture Mr. Joehankins voice the way my friend does.
Yup haha. KG voice good
ok well im not hating on it but you might want to explain that sprite is a alicorn earlier on in the story now it is just confusing
Trust me, I'll edit that in once I get the time. I just keep forgetting to.