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Mr. Haze


I'm a brony. I love to write, read, draw. I was sucked into the MLP fandom by voluntary choice. I love these stories and I love making stories.

Comments ( 12 )

Contructive criticism is encouraged. Please don't be an ass and just downgrade my story without some justification.

814346 too late some assholes already did.

I will read this later and if i have any CC i'll be sure to write it:twilightsmile:

Thank you, Mil Spec Pony. I appreciate it.

Ill put this in my read later

Im sorry it was a good story but.....:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry: 1 for every chapter.....

umm damn i feel most sorry for twilight i mean really i cant believe she had to kill civilians why didn't the princess halt that... or was she in on it?:unsuresweetie:

Xaldon, it was an insurrection. No pony was allowed to survive. In essence, yes, Celestia allowed the slaying of mares and foals.

WOW! Finally, someone who understands...
Why I scream at night
Why I cry at night
Why I fight sleep every night
Why I am totally alone in a room filled with friends
Why I feel empty and cold
Why I rage

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Thank you DevildogZicora, I got the inspiration from my friend Shepard who suffers from PTSD. He served 3 years in Afghanistan and he told me a lot of war stories that even made me cringe.

well this sure was an interesting fic to read. Thumbs up for that :twilightsmile:

3A

How, where?what? Started the war?

...How trite.

The thing is, you don`t care enough to remember. They died, you went home, that`s all there is to it. Only a madman would try to remember each one. None of the madmen make it through.

What war DOES teach, is to pick it`s battles better.
Neither Rarity nor Sweetie Belle would`ve bothered ruminating if they are "good" ponies or not. They`d both be very well aware they`re not. But trying to be.
Twilight wouldn`t care to mouth off pointlessly - why appeal a doomed angle? Imply the nobles in question are morons instead - "Sure, I could kill every last pony out there. But you have to ask yourself - what gain is there in it? Granted, right now they`re enemy combatants. They used to be, however, tax-paying citizens, and with some coercion they could become tax-paying citizens once more. Now, I`m not sure about you and your "noble" ideals, but I do prefer the majority of enemy becomes tax-paying citizens rather then corpses we have to bury at our own expense. So, yes, I will insist on and advocate minimizing casualties on both sides whenever possible."
The bits with Applejack and food are just stupid. They`re PONIES. They can subsist on damn grass. It won`t be fancy dinner, but it will satisfy their nutritional necessities.
Fluttershy`s reservations are admittedly most rational out of the whole bunch. Still, growing callous is an ever-present danger for any medic, particularly so - combat one.
Dash`s situation is stupidly mishandled. Why would princess want to brand her a traitor? War is over. Make it public knowledge she has PTSD, imply that it`s all rebels fault for damaging best of the best, and voila. Plenty of good PR, and no one gives a damn about what Dash herself thinks on the issue.
Pinkie makes no sense at all. So she effectively goes turncoat in a bloodlust, and still somehow survives long enough to make it into asylum after war? Poppycock and garbage, I say. She`d never survive the rest of war after going rogue on everyone.

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