A new psychologist has arrived to Canterlot High. Doctor Eclipse seems like a normal man doing his job, but Sunset and Twilight soon discover that is an old sorcerer vanished from Equestria that wants revenge. They have to fight but their friends have been divided and now Sunset and Twilight have to look for a way to unite their friends again so they can stop Doctor Eclipse, or both their world and Equestria will be lost forever.
-Side note, in this FimFic Spike is NOT a dog but Twilight's Younger Brother.
Chapters (2)
This definetly has potential, though I think expanding the length of your chapters to at least 2,000 would help with storytelling. You might also want an editor.
7556465 Thanks. This Chapter I made it purposefully short to introduce the Dazzlings. I really need an editor as I am barely able to go through spelling without making a mistake and the spellcheck tool is no help at all. Can you recommend anyone that may help me?
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I actually think I'd be up to the position.
7556530 If you want to be my guest, I'd be more than grateful.
I am sorry to say the only thing I can offer you in return is to write stories for you of the ponies you want doing what you want. And believe me I'd deliver as long as it is not too gross or gory.
Thanks also for following me.
Does this story have anything to do with We Are What We Are?
7556730 Nope, is just my story.