Hikaru is a young adult pony who has yet to get his cutiemark. He longs to find his true calling but is unable to do so as his strict father keeps him working in the family hotel all day and night.
Hikaru finds his escape from his boring life through trance music and talking with his best and only friend, Sky Breeze. When he finds out that his favorite artist are coming to town for a large event, Hikaru must find a way to convince his father to let him go. But will his father allow it? And what is in the future for Hikaru and Sky?
Chapters (20)
You put it here now? YOU NEVER TOLD ME
anyways, good story
Dean is not pressing f5 a few hundred times on your story
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Carl, stop blaming it on me...
I guess I'll have to remove the views then?
Apparently, in10secondsflat is a legendary parasprite. Me, him, and 20percentcooler all come from the same place. Yo hoof! Lol
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I was just going to say... each chapter had about fifty something views earlier... and then I see your comment...
w00t an update!
Why nice chapter, it does give me an empty feeling, but i suppose that blank is just so.
WAT
lol wut?
Remind me again what the story has to do with Vinyl Scratch if she never actually appeared?
20223 All in time, She is going to be in this quite a bit in future chapters.
:)
Oh yes, Duct Tape, the gift of the GODS!
BUCK THE POLICE
man... hikaru sounds a lot like me, well minus the whole father issues thing. keep up the great work, i am loving this story
okay, that's an interesting turn of events...
:3
i hope hikaru gets his cutie mark soon
this is gonna be interesting...
that dad is one of the worst dads in history!!!
FU*CK! that guy is just a son of a BIT*H! HE IS THE FAILURE!!!!!! I AM ABOUT WRITE A STORY ABOUT MY MLP CHARACTER KILLING HIM!!!
if that is gilda, thank you
You have my ATMOST SUPPORT NINJASTAR91774!! BEAT HIS SORRY ASS!!!
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Everyday i'm shuffling.
ooh... that's unfortunate...
Hurrah for cutie marks!!
I love this. And to be quite honest, I think I love you.
I honestly think this was great work and I've never seen such a tearjerker. The natural flow of energy and emotion... the plot development... all just great. I read A LOT of stories on fimfiction, but this one definitely is on my top 5. I guess its just I can relate to this story so much. The life I live now is just the same, and I feel the same emotions you described: the rush of freedom, the liberty to make your own decisions. I have the same craving for dubstep, trance, and hell... any electronic song. You strung the right cords in my heart, and did something no other author has managed to do to me; you made me appreciate the great life I have now.
I am confused as to why this received low ratings, for I see so much potential in this story and you pulled it all together great. Your writing technique is better than most authors, and you obviously have standards set for grammar and spelling. I'm also happy to see this story mention glowsticking (one of my favorite dances) and have a great romance. In the end, I'll track you, throw a mention of this story in mine, and follow your work.
Take it easy mate. -FrostBite
P.S. I know I probably sound like a little colt when I say this, but a sequel to this would be AMAZING. I think I would never be as excited for a sequel of a story as this.
a sequel would be awesome i agree. i'd like to know what ended up happening to Hikaru's father among other things.
P.S.: this story got me into glowsticking, i still suck but thanks for the introduction to the art.
First!
92426 I agree
I imagine... Me ... And you... beating that guy's plot
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First!!
First!! ;P
I'm lost now.
Wow! I didn't know that hikaru and sky are hipsters.
Maybe they will soon make a record for DJ PON3 made entirely out of duct tape!
33542 BUCK YEAH!
First!!;P
This was a pretty nice story, though I was hoping for some closure between Hikaru and his dad
First!!;P
Awesome!
And First!! ;P
ME SMASH BAD FATHER!!!!
If I worked at that kind of hotel, I would leave.
I'm no expert but, Storms buisness might be not going so well.
I would rather trust a Ferangi from Star Trek then Storm. At leats they know how to run a buisness.
Fire in a can...