I love this story! I'm finally caught up and moving onto your other stories. This one just happens to be one I started recently so it was easy to catch up
You had a perfectly good father-sister relationship. And you had to ruin it. And you destroyed most if not all of the mystery in one chapter. Not sure why you did it, unless it's mean to be over already.
I'm sorry, but I had to yank your chain just a little. I hope you will forgive me.
On a more serious note, the answers were always coming this way. It was planned. Because, Competent Cadance.
It should be noted that not everything was answered, some of it was guessed.
This will be over by about chapter ten or so and with how it ends, I already know that people will be begging for a sequel or for the story to continue.
7538577 That's the sad part about this. It's going to be ending soon. I'm really loving this. It kinda does feel like an info dump all in one chapter but I find myself not caring about it all that much.
7538558 And didn't that backfire, but in a good way. Incidentally, I know you are going to hate this but, any movement on 'the chase' or 'the catch' in the foreseeable future? I miss Bucky,Derpy,Bloody and Rye.
If I ever get around to writing about Prep Academy, which was mentioned in TLatHH, there will be a lot of romance reports. It is a school where Cadance encourages her students to date one another and there are many romantic endeavours.
Just starting out by saying that I waited until now to start reading Blank so I could binge read the chapters and I'm so glad I did. I absolutely can't wait for the next update, I'm already following for the perilous romance of swans ,and this story just proves what a good author you are. Happy writing and Blessed be ~TRK
You did notice that she has been attracted to him for several chapters now, correct? And even with these obvious hints, you chose to see it another way? If you ignore the hints, you set yourself up for disappointment. I mean, you can't say that you didn't see it coming.
I mean, I apologise that you are unhappy, but contradicting what is already there would do the story a great disservice.
7664750 It was hinted that she loved him, yes. And yes, the chemestry was here. But love does not always equal romance. From the way he was mentoring her, raising her from the scratch, it felt far more like the love of a father and the love of a daughther. And it felt good to see for once a story about love that wasn't about romance.
And to be honest, while I would've loved it to be true, if you left thing open to interpretation, it would've been better. You made a very short story, and left a lot of things open for the future. Leaving thing like that to the imagination of your reader would've been great.
And all in all, I'm not upset, just disapointed. And more -far more- because the pacing made a mad dash to the finish and the story was abrutly ended then because of what relationship you choose to give your characters.
All in all, still a pleasant story to read. Just, not as great as what I thougth it would be?
7665312 I don't know.... it would depend on what President. Like..... if it was Lincoln i would be hesitant, Obama i might be uncomfortable but i would probably answer with something, and with Clinton i wouldn't say shit.
So if Cadence asked me when the last time i was laid i would probably answer honestly due to her being an expert on love. Even though it would be awkward as hell. I don't think i could say anything to Celestia though, i would die of high blood pressure first.
“It’d be like… it’d be like having your way with a feral mustang. Morally, ethically, it’s wrong. I could never do such a thing. Ever. My honour would never permit it.”
I love this story! I'm finally caught up and moving onto your other stories. This one just happens to be one I started recently so it was easy to catch up
Cadance is like a sex therapist or something. That's pretty funny.
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Um, check out the Weed Verse.
You had a perfectly good father-sister relationship.
And you had to ruin it.
And you destroyed most if not all of the mystery in one chapter. Not sure why you did it, unless it's mean to be over already.
I feel disappointed.
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I'm sorry. I did say that Cadance would bring answers.
And yes, this will be over soon.
Im disappointed.
I know you said this story wouldn't last long, but I was expecting it to be at least decently long.
I love this story, and it's being rushed at this chapter. I wanted it to continue how it was, the answers not being spoon-fed to us.
Tbh I thought she was a corrupted pony.
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Perhaps it would be better to cancel the story and leave the answers untouched.
7538530 well if your new to Kudzu then you got a lot of catching up to do 926 chapters in one of his stories "The Chase"
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Omg no. NEVER having the answers is just as bad as having them spoon-fed to you!
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I'm sorry, but I had to yank your chain just a little. I hope you will forgive me.
On a more serious note, the answers were always coming this way. It was planned. Because, Competent Cadance.
It should be noted that not everything was answered, some of it was guessed.
This will be over by about chapter ten or so and with how it ends, I already know that people will be begging for a sequel or for the story to continue.
7538814
l already want a sequel/continuation!
7538577 That's the sad part about this. It's going to be ending soon. I'm really loving this. It kinda does feel like an info dump all in one chapter but I find myself not caring about it all that much.
7538565 it's a trap.
He's trying to make you feel like you know everything.
Trust me.
7538558 And didn't that backfire, but in a good way. Incidentally, I know you are going to hate this but, any movement on 'the chase' or 'the catch' in the foreseeable future? I miss Bucky,Derpy,Bloody and Rye.
7538814 Dang it, there better be sequel. I'll be a looking.
Very nice chapter.
Loved the demons having a different perspective bit, it made sense.
Good work.
I know I said this before but I just love how you write Cadance. Romance reports, I see what you did there.
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If I ever get around to writing about Prep Academy, which was mentioned in TLatHH, there will be a lot of romance reports. It is a school where Cadance encourages her students to date one another and there are many romantic endeavours.
7546727 that sounds really interesting. I'll be looking foward to it when/if you get to writing it.
Very much enjoying this so far.
Out of curiosity, does this story take place in the same 'verse as any of your other works?
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There is a Weed World group marker over yonder ----->
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Oho I did not notice that!
Now I'm excited for the potential interactions between our intrepid adventurers and the adorkable she-demon..
7538565 I agree with that too. Maybe thats part of why I wasn't exactly happy with it now.
Just starting out by saying that I waited until now to start reading Blank so I could binge read the chapters and I'm so glad I did. I absolutely can't wait for the next update, I'm already following for the perilous romance of swans ,and this story just proves what a good author you are. Happy writing and
Blessed be ~TRK
We know you're alive. Fimfiction tells us these things.
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I am Schrodinger's Writer.
We need more of this. This has my interest.
7538565
I still can't figure out what the hell a father-sister relationship is.
This doesn't even make sense. At all. In the slightest. I've been trying to figure this out for a while now. Is it a language barrier? A typo?
What in the blue hells is a father-sister relationship?
7664582 A typo. Father-daugther is what I meant.
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You did notice that she has been attracted to him for several chapters now, correct? And even with these obvious hints, you chose to see it another way? If you ignore the hints, you set yourself up for disappointment. I mean, you can't say that you didn't see it coming.
I mean, I apologise that you are unhappy, but contradicting what is already there would do the story a great disservice.
7664750 It was hinted that she loved him, yes. And yes, the chemestry was here. But love does not always equal romance. From the way he was mentoring her, raising her from the scratch, it felt far more like the love of a father and the love of a daughther. And it felt good to see for once a story about love that wasn't about romance.
And to be honest, while I would've loved it to be true, if you left thing open to interpretation, it would've been better. You made a very short story, and left a lot of things open for the future. Leaving thing like that to the imagination of your reader would've been great.
And all in all, I'm not upset, just disapointed. And more -far more- because the pacing made a mad dash to the finish and the story was abrutly ended then because of what relationship you choose to give your characters.
All in all, still a pleasant story to read. Just, not as great as what I thougth it would be?
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The story hasn't ended.
It was just delayed for a while.
7664873 To quote you:
7538577
Did you change your plan? Or am I misinterpreting what you said?
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I think I misunderstood something you said. No worries.
I've actually been pondering a longer sequel for this. I have some loose ideas, but I don't know if they will form a story.
Just to put this into perspective: to Malcanus this would be as if the PRESIDENT ask you that. That is a whole lot of akward
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I don't know.... it would depend on what President. Like..... if it was Lincoln i would be hesitant, Obama i might be uncomfortable but i would probably answer with something, and with Clinton i wouldn't say shit.
So if Cadence asked me when the last time i was laid i would probably answer honestly due to her being an expert on love. Even though it would be awkward as hell. I don't think i could say anything to Celestia though, i would die of high blood pressure first.
7665312
I would just answer, it is not like it is something to be ashamed of.
So there are basic horses in this equestria?