Calling it now, "blank" was a pony before becoming a Tiufel Spawn in Tartarus. Or at least a part of her was if she is a being formed with multiple being.
This is AMAZING! You leave it's wanting more so effortlessly...I especially love how new everything feels to her. Like...like every day is a miracle, an adventure waiting to happen.
Sweet moons, i need a picture of her! She sounds and acts so adorable, reading about her pain is like seeing a puppy behind thick glass getting kicked!
I really like the story so far. So yes. Still, my nightmares are legion and without mercy. I cannot remember when I last had a full day of respite from them. Even as I try to distract myself, a single word, a simple situation is enough to let them slip back in, strike at my heart, strike at my soul, leaving me bleeding. They haunt my sleep and I find myself waking with tears from yet another bad dream, or worse, with lingering memories of once better days, never to come back.
I wish I could truly escape, but right now I can only try to run, try to hide, and I dread the day I grow too weary and tired to keep struggling.
8082191 Some days I wonder if it would be better to wake in cold sweats. To run screaming from the shadows because something's within them.
But my torment is that of blandness.
Each day go through the motions. Get up, work, classes, go home and finish assignments, rinse and repeat. Who knows if I'm in the middle of the good ol' days or not. The shadows are much like my dreamless sleep, empty.
well there goes anopther chunk of my life ta kudz stories. This looks promising.
Calling it now, "blank" was a pony before becoming a Tiufel Spawn in Tartarus. Or at least a part of her was if she is a being formed with multiple being.
I'm craving Irish Spring with a shot of Elmers glue to chase it down
Ugh, my love for this story just keeps growing! When will the wonderfulness of reading this end?!
*whispers* Hopefully never!
How big is this thing am trying to figure it out but it seems to be gigantic to pony size. How big is she?
7473470
She stands at about the same height as a pony, but she is at least six ponies long, snort holes to tail. Her tail takes up ⅔rds of her length.
I have no idea what I'm reading but I find myself loving it more and more with every word. Keep it up.
7473479
Could we get a sketch of her? Or even just a line drawing of structure like f.tqn.com/y/drawsketch/1/S/K/W/horse-jumping-structure-1.jpg ?
7473610
I can't draw worth a shit with a partially paralysed hand.
I am soaping that this story takes off.
7473732
That was slick.
7473737
Yeah, i slipped up there a little. I really need to clean up my act.
7473786
Most people try to raise the bar; you have dropped it.
7473788
Beats being on a rope. The sudspense is killing me.
7473812
7473788
All these one-liners keep bubbling up.
Perhaps we should drop them?
7473881
Yeah, we should wash our hands of them.
This is AMAZING! You leave it's wanting more so effortlessly...I especially love how new everything feels to her. Like...like every day is a miracle, an adventure waiting to happen.
I held out to let it get a few chapters in. This is great, my only fear is how long till it tuns in to a big picture war story.
Loved the chapter, great work.
This was a fantastic chapter <3
7473220 I´m selling t-shirts with that slogan...want one ?
7474568 shut up and take my bits
7473643
7473812
7473881
my god, the puns! make it stop!!
(but for real, that was funny as hell. forgot how to breathe for a minute there...)
Rats >.< just got into it!
Well, you convinced me; I'm in! Another promising story, keep up the fantastic work!
*insert phunny pun here*
7473643 Found this, I thought it might be close to what you describe her as but not six legs and limbs not mismatched enough. She's Pandora, daughter of Discord & Twilight.
img01.deviantart.net/c5c1/i/2016/088/a/1/daughter_of_discord_by_cloud_dash-d9x06ra.jpg
orig02.deviantart.net/59f1/f/2016/150/8/a/_fa__pandora_for_lopoddity_by_riotlizard-da4ekdi.png
I'm forever blowing bubbles!
Sweet moons, i need a picture of her! She sounds and acts so adorable, reading about her pain is like seeing a puppy behind thick glass getting kicked!
Enjoying a pleasant read? A good escape?
...
I really like the story so far. So yes.
Still, my nightmares are legion and without mercy. I cannot remember when I last had a full day of respite from them. Even as I try to distract myself, a single word, a simple situation is enough to let them slip back in, strike at my heart, strike at my soul, leaving me bleeding. They haunt my sleep and I find myself waking with tears from yet another bad dream, or worse, with lingering memories of once better days, never to come back.
I wish I could truly escape, but right now I can only try to run, try to hide, and I dread the day I grow too weary and tired to keep struggling.
8082191
Some days I wonder if it would be better to wake in cold sweats. To run screaming from the shadows because something's within them.
But my torment is that of blandness.
Each day go through the motions. Get up, work, classes, go home and finish assignments, rinse and repeat. Who knows if I'm in the middle of the good ol' days or not. The shadows are much like my dreamless sleep, empty.