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Well that's cathartic for everyone involved...me included...
He might have gained all of her attention, it wouldn't be weird if he got 'invited' to offical functions as her 'plus one' as a covert summons.
hmm... who are the 'guests' i wonder?
did i just saw celestia being destroyed in a conversation?
Beautiful
Well, they will first kill a third of total population in a civil war, then another third will be killed by griffins and other possible invaders(skip this part if Celestia takes care of them) and only then will build something resembling government.
Do you feel the burn, Celestia? Cause you got roasted.
I just found this story, and I must say.......I am really sad now there is no more chapters to read. This series is amazing.
Ok, I have to say this chapter, kinda killed it for me. 1000 plus years, and some nobody tells her what to do, and she breaks down in tears and is about to quit ruling. Heck some nobody who isn't even in government or has any real idea what is going on in the country and/or culture wise somehow knows more then everyone else.
I wish you luck with the story but this chapter is where I stop.
7511633 Thanks for giving it a shot, bruh.
I believe all I said in the last chapter has actually only been further proven by this one. At least the beginning concept was nice. I like fics that look right at the hard, gritty underbelly of a dystopia disguised as a utopia but your main character is all over the place and a Mary Sue to boot.
well you did ask them celestia and they let you know there mind.
Still reading and is still quite entertained.
Please continue good sir.
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i must have read something different, cause no where is she in tears, nor does she hint she is gonna stop ruling. also previous chapters detailed that he is basically living in the slums. they also have a caste system of unicorns > pegasus > earth. his observation isnt exactly false. narrow minded cause of his lack of travel, but from what he sees in canterlot fairly accurate. his questions are also fair ones that help force celestia to open her eyes in how she has been governing. i feel you are just mad that the author managed to find some flaws in the cannon that burst the bubble of a utopia.
Savage~
7512079 First I never once said cannon is a utopia. In fact in alot of ways it's worse the Earth. Really ponies have to have fear that at any point in time, some horror from literal Hell can burst out and destroy their cites. There are mad warlocks and mages running about, evil and or mad deities, and even Kaju, along with the usual jerks, criminals and con artistes. Even the environment is worse, at least we as humans don't have to worry about fire swamps, monster infested death forests, and living blizzards.
Second what killed my enjoyment is a loss of a sense of disbelief. Like I said, the main character is a nobody. He lives in a slum. Has no real job. And yet somehow Celestia cares enough about his opinion that she's almost speechless at the end of the chapter. Heck I would read another work by this author, so I don't have a problem with him or her.
Awe hell yeh new chapter
I think you broke it.
He broke Celestia
I think the chapter with Celestia hadn't come out good as it should be. Celestia become a shuttering mess after only 1 session. I expect her to be the toughest nut to crack.
Also, Celestia is supposed to receive every citizen in need of assistance on her royal court, so she does see commoners of every race every day.
I liked her first impression you made of Celestia when the therapist meet her for the first time. I envision her like the Big Boss our protagonist had to battle in a clash of deep psychology and opinions. She ruled alone a country for a thousand years, her mentality should be dead set on a certain point of view, like a rock.
To bad
This was pretty much a breaking point for my own reading, jeez.
Damn talking to the princess like that just made me happy you guys.
I'm a little bit late on this. Been binge reading for the past day. Do people really think this is Celestia? I sure don't.
Seemed like Twilight was pretending to be her by using a spell or something.
This can't be Celestia. No way.
7511386 Darn tootin ya did
Joker laugh!
this celestia makes me cringe, there's no way celestia can rule that long and still become a stuttering mess if somebody tells her she's a horrible person. even if you ran an utopia country (which she doesn't) there would still be a few who have been against celestia's rule and told it to her face. I'll keep reading, but if stuff like this continues to happen I'm going to be unable to trudge through. which is sad, because I loved everything before this chapter
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It’s big b0i stronk man
U rong
Does it hurt, to read that the white horse get put down?
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You pretty much hit it right on the head. This celestia seems pretty weak minded and to easy to confuse. I expected way more for there confrontation than her being a jibbering mess. I wasn't expecting a great battle but also at the same time not this weak kneed being either.
Oh God!!! blow across the face !!! finally someone who could tell celestia things as is!
best chapter ever !!!
Just slap her I guess