This exact premise was floating around in my brain and I was hoping someone would be able to make it work. I can't wait to see more.

Good start.

I must say, you should use spacing a bit. The wall of text is a bit intimidating... I can only imagine what it's like for new readers. Still, interesting concept. Will read and come back.

My god, this got depressing. I really like the way the whole story I written from his perspective properly.

Depressing