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the typical pretty girl that thinks she's ugly
Good job. (Need some character ideas? I'm open. Just send a reply on my profile page and I'll reply back on yours. You did ask one time)
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BRAVO! Realy loving this story so far! I can not help myself imagining the protagonist as the protagonist of " We Happy Few " or as Anton Ego from " Ratatouille ". I know this maybe sound kinda bad, but, I hope to see this story get a little more dark, but not dark like
crawling in my crawl!. But dark like, real life, like the troubles or sad moments that forces us to stop and think, to stop and have a little talk with a friend. Troubles that ponies must put a persona o a façade to hide. I hope to se more of your work n.n.IDEAS: the more likely it is that you do not like them but here they are let's start with something a little "heavy" suicidal thoughts , poor family relationship, a story related to the capital sins for example x can't stop waisting his/her bits at some casino. X pony don't like the princess/royalty/government. After some chapters bring back characters that have already appeared or another point of view, for example violet from ch. 1. For some cómic realief, have a poorly disguised main characters. If you do this, please make a chapter about Celestia and that she thinks that her subjects are weak or sometimes a little dumb that's all the ideas I have in my Head at the moment. If you want to know more or some details about them or just talk, send me a pm or something. Bye bye :v
I love that you wrote this and watched three episodes of the show. It's hilariously awkward.
And the flat out denial of help continues. These guys are kind of assholes, they could at least pretend to listen...
Also, I find that going to the gym decimates my self-esteem.
Interesting
I can sketch, so I may be able to doodle some things. I'll get back to that later. And if it's cool with you I may try recording a reading of this.
Ponies are Dicks.
I have a therapist, and I do listen to his opinion. Probably because I've known him since up was ten, but still.