Equestria is a world of life and light, of green hills and deep forests. A jewel of the universe, a gem so rare that the requirements for its formation are astronomical.
But it was not always so, and it had help in beating the odds to become the world it is today. Many things are hidden by history, and ponykind is about to be exposed to one of them.
For life on Equestria is not normal, marked and changed as it was long ago by beings greater then any of the worlds current inhabitants. And now that a question and a request have been asked the ancient guardians left behind by those great beings must guide their lesser kin to the great test that was left behind.
And what will happen once the great test has been taken? That not even the goddesses of the sun and the moon can say.
Seems good enough, no
grammarmistakes in the description, that's always a good sign.EDIT: I'll put all
grammarmistakes I catch down here. Seemingly good so far, I'll give you a thumbs up. (You've got to catch them In the sentences, think of it as training."Be welcome Dancing Brush my little pony. All is well i hope?"
The stallon jumps. Startled by the gentle words but gathers himself quickly and responds as best he an.
"Your highness, i have been tasked by my friends and assosciates at the university to ask for a lift of the ban upon
means and i have brougth with me documented proof to show this. Please your highness, read what we have
the subject you wish to pursue where placed there for a reason that neither i nor my sister have ever shared with
"I know this is sudden little ones, and that it causes you much confusion. But in this i have no choice. I must leave as i was ordered to do so long ago. Be strong while we are gone and do not despair. What is to come will be the culmination of eons of waiting and preparation."