FOE story mixed with FO4, meet the Sole Survivor of Stable 111 Fast Times, a colt from before the great war who's spent 90% of the time since in cryo sleep. But something goes wrong on his last time in the freezer...
Page generated in 0.052 seconds
Total duration
943 users online
347,340 hits today, 1,960,719 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Super awesome, then super sad. And DAAAAAAANG! Bypass spell that goes through power armor! That’s a problem.
Given how they are taking an area so close to the Castle, I see war happening very, very soon.
MORE
Holy shiiiiiiiiiit that was awesome
Sweet Honey Ice Tea! That was intense.
What an update! Action and drama. I think I used half a box of tissues. Keep them coming, I might survive them...
Glitter, a foal of many hats (jobs).
Wow I wasn't expecting the bypass spell bullet, that's some scary stuff!
I had to read it a 2ed time as it was just so good and sad and like idn man.... Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I hadn't seen you were doing the little artwork things for the talents now! Those are adorable!
Compared to Vega who's an ass and Dala who was... Creepy, Klein's brand of insanity is very enjoyable to read. He's very much a 'love to hate' antagonist, enjoyable to read and almost charistmatic in a way. He clearly believvs he's in the right and willing to push towards it, there's just one thing in his idealogy that makes it less than admirable, which is the embodiment of what makes modern-day villains. In Klein's case, it's as Fast put it:
I also always hear Dr. Kleiner's voice from Half Life for him, for obvious reasons, which makes him more endearing than he deserves.
I can't believe it's been almost 50 chapters since Fast became an alicorn. Everything that's happened since feels so much bigger than what came before. I guess war and a harem will do that.
The Shroud in his head especially became more prevalent, and is probably the most fascinating part of the story. With Klein right out confirming this isn't just Fast being insane, this means there is a probably malevolent - or at least extremely careless - spirit in his head. That it's been cooperative in any capacity is an interesting development. Next step is to reforge it into the Shroud of comic and legend, of course. Maybe make it even better.
Perhaps it reflects poorly on me that I see this spirit murder Scopes grandma in cold blood AND nearly snap like it did near the end of this chapter and think 'you'll do better next time sport!'
Nice foreshadowing
I couldn't help myself
I just watched an episode of Doctor Who that showed this mob mentality rather well. The episode was "Midnight" if I remember right. It's amazing and sad how fast and effective fear can be at destroying companionship and belief.
78.media.tumblr.com/7de4b20b1215989f7db8624a4aa96a06/tumblr_og8ddhQJ241qdhps7o9_r2_250.gif
Sorry I've been just waiting for this, as I'm sure everyone has and probably everypony.
These two certainly have come along way since that first battle with those raiders at the gas stop.
Wait a minute...
You sly dog
That's funny
You wouldn't happen to know a master of the mystic arts called Dr. Stephen Strange, would you?
Probably not, huh?
Am I the only one who got Bioshock vibes from this?
I'm certain most of these things I find are not actually pop-culture references, but I just can't help seeing them.
Cap would be proud
Well damn man
Fast really got dangerous there at the end
9489312
When is there more coming out?
Wow! Powerful chapter! Really good writing! Hell....I've been in the shit.....and you got me crying!
The wedding made the dark voice in my head tell me that I’ll never have someone like jade or be happy... what a wonderful life I have, huh? Other than that, great chapter. RIP Burny....
It just felt right...
9529092
I guess I must of missed those parts, been a while since I last read original FO:E, though I thought pip was a corrupted version of her element, I think it was kindness? I thought it implied that she was close, but not what the elements needed to he activated. Anyway, thanks for letting me know, love these stories, always a good read!
9539131
Ah, when it comes to weapons, I'm going off game lore and info for the most part, so I appreciate the RL experience. I assumed the grenade machine gun and 25mm rounds are both supsension of disbelief weapons, like plasma casters and such. The linked wiki lists in game specs and such which Val's weapon essentially conforms to, so not realistic, but canon to New Vegas anyway and difficult to retcon. Thanks for the expert feedback though!
Hum... I think I see a problem. Not with the story overall, but a detail missing. The Races are coming up soon, the armor is painted and about tuned to be 'right'... But there is NO mention of Jade having 'scoped out' the race 'track'!!
Now, if I was going to race, in a souped-up car, on a special track made just for high speeds, I'd want to pace out the track. Get a feel for where to make turns, how hard to make them, how much speed I could safely go for into them without spinning out. Where on the track I could just 'floor it' for speed without much need of the kind of control needed for turns, etc.
You should 'get' the idea. So far, nowhere, has there been a mention of Jade getting a feel for the course she's about to fly, at speed far greater than she's ever attained before.
Considering Fast's obsession with 'his' mare's safety. I don't really see where even he would fail to point out that Jade needs to know the track at 'normal' speeds, before attempting it at much higher ones! That's not in keeping with his 'need to protect'... 'His' mares.
... Yup, thought so. No practice, bumbling flight. Luckily Jade as a fantastic suit.
Ya know? I was just thinking while reading the build-up scenes, that this would be a good time for Raiders or Gunners to attack, and yup... here they are... but wait, not raiders and such... Institute Synths... figures.
Sabotage... I wonder how many know where that word came from? The fact that a Sabo, or 'sah-bow' was a wooden shoe of the old Dutch during the early Industrial Revolution. And that the workers, afraid that their families would starve from all the new machines taking away their relatively high paying wages as craftsmen, threw their shoes into the gears to damage and destroy those machines? That Sabo-tage means literally 'Shoe harm'.
Daaawwwww... So cute. The wedding was pretty well written. I did like the inclusion of the lines from the song that Buttercup (aka: Pear Butter) sang for Bright Macintosh... "On a prickly path that goes on for miles..."
I don't remember the Atom Cats having the means for a 'drive in' theater in the game, but hey... Artistic License and all that. No worries.
Chapter 99. I don't know how the Crazy One can wrap things up in one or two chapters though. There is enough left hanging, enough other sites to visit, other adventures to tell, scattered in the story to keep this going for at least a dozen or more chapters... say, 20 more to be cooler? :)
Just me, being me,
the Frank Pony
I think dr Mobius created the barrier to keep the rest of the institute from getting out of the commonwealth and spreading out to the rest of Equestria. Maybe he knew what the think tank did was wrong and after learning that everypony in shift four was murdered and thinking Fast was killed along with them was the last straw.
Also I think that after Fast destroyed all of dr dala’s research she’s been in her doll house rethinking her life choices. She’s probably going to change for the better...
Now, when Fast is married it seems he's not getting Val her silk sheets and flowers eh? Valkyrie became my favourite from the first sight, I loved her personality and character overall, her personal chapters like 56 and a part of 57 are awesome. But it was sad to see that after 87th, the chapter with all that deep stuff I was waiting for so long, when she finally opened up completely, there was just... nothing, I guess? Like, that just gotten over with, no big deal. Jade won't share now, will she? :c Pls can it at least be Zed? Bluejay felt too hollow and put here forcibly just to fill the place
Bypass rounds... fuck, If the Institute has those...
The heppest of the hep cats, LB
Insanely long chapter #1: down.
Yeah, this chapter clocks in at 87 pages in my e-book file I have downloaded, I read them all, and I didn’t regret a moment. The wedding was great, except that Swan now poses a problem. I also quite enjoyed Fast’s interactions with Klein, and the fact that the jerk lied on two counts. Burny’s death was also well-written and actually made me feel something (impressive feat in of itself). I also came up with another theory here.
I have noticed that Fast’s Shroud rather enjoys using Best Served. So, I have a little minor idea why. Perhaps they are attracted to each other because they are both ‘dark’ as Zed puts it, and the darkness wants to utilize the darkness. It’s small, but it might have some substance.
9552850
No, Jade will still share, they already saw each other as husband and wife before the marriage, and she had no qualms there. This was just making it official, and Jade very clearly states that they’ll figure out some way to make Swan feel like she’s getting her ‘Fast’s love’ due. She’d probably do the same for Val.
But, I have to say, I myself much prefer Jade and Zed over Val. Not to say anyone’s a bad character here, but when you’ve got so many great characters, you have to choose.
When I fart it's like that. Don't feed me beans.
I don't know, this particular area of the Commonwealth is Klein's personal playground, not so sure Vega would be able to mess around with things here