FOE story mixed with FO4, meet the Sole Survivor of Stable 111 Fast Times, a colt from before the great war who's spent 90% of the time since in cryo sleep. But something goes wrong on his last time in the freezer...
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It’s pretty plain that Jade and Fast are willing to be more open in their relationship.
I need the next chapter PLEASE!!!
The shackles have been broken. The Shroud is free.
Glitter's been a spy this whole time. I had a feeling when the diaries name dropped 'Small Wonder' but...
Book 1 had ended with Fast throwing himself out of a window to catch her and becoming an alicorn, if I remember right. Now Book 2 ends with her gone. That's... Poetic? Maybe? Where will Book 3 end I wonder? With those children being born and maybe Fast returning? A cycle of rebirth that began in a spare cryo unit.
That is kind of what this story on the whole has been about, isn't it? Birth and Rebirth? And I don't just mean the excessive amount of... Ahem, copulation. Every positive change in this story is something new or reborn in some way, starting really with the young Followers that even now are something like ten years old. The Kingdom of Sanctuary, birthed alongside the rebirthed Minutemares. Every town they've touched, starting with Fast and co overthrowing a corrupt government official way back when. Basically everything in between too. This chapter began with Burny's funeral, but his children bear his legacy.
It's also been the undying - in some capacity - that's been the enemy of this story. The Institution heads are basically immortalized by their brain jars. The Shroud is an immaterial spirit, and dying rarely comes to those naturally. Even on a less literal level, corruption and long standing systems such as the governance of Dreadnaught using their old orders to stay in control.
Maybe I'm thinking to much into it. The Shroud has been incredibly fascinating, but I fear for the world now that he's loose. Maybe, just maybe... Something of his time in Fast's head will stick with him?
Damn... reading that this is the end of book 2, just made me think "How much bigger is this story going to be?"
Also, damn you, you horrible, horrible monster for doing that to Glitter.
I had thought glitter would be replaced, but seeing as she had a twin...it makes sense now. She is a copy of her sister.
And if anyone can save her, it’s Mobius...
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE
Finally, my obsession can be satiated for a time.
But...I-I...I gotta have more man! Come on you gotta have more on you! I need my fix!
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If you use the reader thingy. It says fix a me.
Like a female mario
All hell brakes loose, what’s left of Fast’s sanity and self control is gone... welp see ya next chapter!
Also shouldn’t this be the end of act 2?
Thinking more on it now, would the railroad be able to help glitter? They have the synths of 2 institute heads there that may know how to fix her, or at least talk to patriot to help.
Plus, I think glitter might be the only thing that can let fast reconstruct a stable personality, at least during the day. Night...yea, not happening
Just wow dude, this is epic stuff. I hope your going to bronycon this year so I can meet you and shake your hand. This story is beyond what the original one did and I am not sure but I think your out doing sombra from project Horizons, I can't wait for this to be finished so they make a book copy so I can own a work of fantastic quality.
Finally! I've been waiting for Fast to let go since the beginning! I can't wait to see him go on all kinds of smashing adventures with Swan, starting with the Institute's twisted mockery of Celestia. How dare they bring her back in a disgusting synth body instead of cloning her like any sensible scientist would!
Heya there Crazy One.
Yay, a new chapter!
And we start out with one of our favorite DJs and a bit of Jingle Cash (great pun on Johnny Cash, also the song 'hurt', one of my favorite covers, sung by the 'man in black').
The mourning and funeral were very well done. Jade's speech was 'purr-fect'. And what's this? The old Shroud helping? My, my, whatever will this portend?
Like the ancient Nightmare Moon being reformed back to Princess Luna? The Dark Shroud returning to the noble version? One can only hope... for Fast to last long enough for it to happen.
Okay, while reading the lead up to the battle Fast promised the former Over-mare of Vault 114, I saw Mire-Tanks mentioned and that sparked a thought...
Pony Powered Armor, the Collegiate, and old issues of Pony Technology Today magazine. Fast would be familiar with all of this by now, including the works of Neighcolta Tesla. I am pretty sure that Fast Times can, with the right plans, whip up a Magical Tesla Field around a suit of Powered Armor.
Something that takes incoming attacks and reflects it back upon the attacker as magical lightning strikes. It would not reflect all of the attack's power, but could probably 'reflect' a goodly portion of it. Things like Mire Tank hatch-lings would be auto-fried, where it would take several hits by larger, more powerful creatures to reflect enough to kill them... reducing the amount of power needed to kill them in the first place.
The combination of a Magical Tesla field and Fast's guns should do the trick for most threats, while protecting him withing the Powered Armor's protection.
Just a couple of thoughts for you, oh Crazy One.
The Shrouded Stallion TV Series... I wonder, would that be like the old B&W Lone Ranger series? Or, like the original Batman and Robin? Or, perhaps, Green Hornet?
Alicorn Angels Adventures... Yeah, Charlie's Angels... that one was easy.
Dr. Vega is, was, Ra-ra's old manager? Svengallop. I knew that name from the earlier chapter back in diamond city was familiar! A synth version of Countess Coloratura in a gilded cage... now why does my mind immediately snap to Songbird Serenade in a cage in Canterlot during the Storm King's invasion?
Wild fight. Fighting copies of everyone you know and trust, including versions of yourselves. Nightmare fuel.
HOLY SH... A synth Celestia 'taken over' by the real spirit of 'Tia from the Single Pony Project tower?? Oh my, things just got INTERESTING.
Cliff Hanger!!!
Damn Crazy One, ya did it again. Don't worry, I WILL be on the look out for the next chapters. Count on it.
the Frank Pony
Holy shit. Nice chapter.
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I’m pretty sure that is the real Princess Celestia since her mind was in the mainframe computer in the SPP(I think thats what was called), they just put her mind into a synth body. Then again I could be wrong...
Holy shit, this chapter is just pure epic!
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I agree with you about it probably being the real Celestia who was stuck in the SPP mainframe. I just don't like the fact the Institute used the DNA samples to stick her in a synth body instead of using them to recreate her original one.
Frig, talk about twisting the knife...
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I kind of suspected this might be the case, the circumstances of Glitter's introduction struck me from the start as being a little suspicious, too neat and clean, a chain of perfect happenstance that expertly inserted Glitter into Fast's life. Mobius probably left a silent alarm in place to let him know if anything ever came staggering out of Stable 111, and either he, or possibly Patriot arranged for Glitter to be in the right place at the right time.
What Glitter just did though, rather soundly rebukes the assertions of Klein and the rest of the Think Tank about the Synths being mere machines, gaining a cutie mark for breaking Vega's control, in plain view of the public no less; which i suspect is why the Celestia Synth suddenly turned hostile. Klein hates to be proven wrong, especially by one of Mobius' creations.
The view outside my window went well with this part while reading it. Grey and dreary.
Glad to see I'm not the only one who likes this version of this song
Sorry couldn't decide on which was better
Definitely an appropriate song choice.
Not sure if anyone else thought of this but I thought this might be fitting as well
Are we positive that this wasn't just a bag The Doctor left behind? I mean DAMN girl!!!!
Sorry instantly thought of Scooby with that last line.
SHIT!!!!!!!!!
I'm sure I'm not the only one to think of this scene.
SSSAAAYYY WWWWHHHAAATTTT!!!???
HOLY CRAP
I finally got back to reading this and damn this chapter gave me some surprises and heartache.
Just damn
Insanely long chapter #2: down.
Unfortunately, I did not finish this one in one day, but I still enjoyed all of it.
Speaking of which, I got a song for the occasion that I was reminded of in the big battle.
Anybody ever heard War Inside My Head by Suicidal Tendencies?
Wow really good chapter I hope that i can be just as good btw I'm also a role player.