FOE story mixed with FO4, meet the Sole Survivor of Stable 111 Fast Times, a colt from before the great war who's spent 90% of the time since in cryo sleep. But something goes wrong on his last time in the freezer...
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Finally! It feels like I've been waiting years for this chapter.
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I agree. And I still want MORE!!!
It was excellent though, so I hope it continues
What can i say exept : poor Fast
Also :
i reely didnt sow that twist with Gliter comming, oh i was totaly expecting that one of his close frends is a synth (Val to be presise, and that she is one of morbius synths to keep an eye on Fast) well i can throw away that theory now. Still i expect that sooner then later we gonna meet Morbius now, and learn moar about his reasons
On the other hand only 18 k words in chapter ?! I was hoping that 50 k words will be the new normal !
Ps. I Love perk pictures that you getting under chapters now xp
Wow! That was powerful and painful. Keep up the good work!
More fine work, I cant wait for more.
I swear, I'm so invested at this point that every chapter, no matter how it ends, is a cliffhanger. Especially now that the Shroud is loose. In his own words...
NEED...WANT...MORE!
How warped must my own morality be, considering I find this ancient spirit of vengeance nothing but adorkable in it's simplicity?
This was good thank you.
Realy great chapter.
I actually felt like this came out quite quickly, don't mind the people thinking it took forever. If we've got to wait a bit for quality writing like this then I say we wait for it, your writing truly continues to amaze and astound.
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I was just about to say the same thing. I was surprised when I saw a new chapter so quickly!
So this chapter was emotional, and I feel awful for Fast's situation. That said there's something really funny about Fast lecturing and insulting the Shroud.
'No Shroud, tearing out the throats of our enemies is not a stage of the grieving process.'
'Please don't eat that raider, you don't know where it's been.'
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I was thinking the same thing. Why do I like this single-minded monster spirit so damn much? It is an objectively awful entity but then it has these moments of caring and I'm like, 'aww, it's learning!'
Cannibalism huh? That's a good way to get sick
Great chapter, can't wait for more!
The first chapter of Act 3 where we see Fast neet the ministry mares in his head, learn what the shroud has been up to in Fast’s absence, what’s been going on in general, and how Fast was dealing with the loss of his daughter... and I got a say, this has been the most emotional set of chapters so far and keep up the amazing work.
49 chapters left, based on 50 chapters per book pattern and 3-act structure... average of 1 chapter per month... 49 months... 4 years and a month before completion... oh boy. Well at least we something to look forward to for a very long time.
Good chapter. Keep it up. I mean that.
Glitter... *cries lots... then goes to find the Shroud and help with the carnage and mayhem*
The real world leaking in. That's my theory.
POKEMON!!!
I'm sorry I just instantly thought of this.
Not quite as humorous as this but I couldn't help but get some serious Venom vibes
Damn good choice. Probably not quite like the original rock song though, huh?
Damn. A good, albeit depressing chapter.
So glad I decided to read two chapters today.
This is arguably the best chapter I’ve ever read in this story, and there’s some pretty stiff competition. Book 1 was better than Book 2 for me, but if Book 3 continues on this trajectory, it’s probably going to solidify this story as my favorite ever.
Where do I start? That beginning was very, well, heavy. There’s so much symbolism with the Ministry Mares helping Fast reawaken from his Shroud-induced stupor. I really loved when he woke up and yelled at the Shroud, too.
Also, I’ve been waiting 80 chapters for it, but I’ve finally seen Drumlin Diner! I have some fond memories of that place for some reason, I really love what you did with it, as well. I love that it functions more like a diner in this universe as opposed to the shop you go to in a pinch if you want .308’s. Also, solidifying Fast’s Shroud-induced insanity, which was awesome (in writing, not you know, actually awesome). Because, honestly, I just convinced Trudy to pay Wolfgang the caps and unlocked two shops in the process. I didn’t actually fight anyone (and Wolfgang sells Addictol, which is super handy when I accidentally take too much Psycho or Med-X).
So yeah, outstanding chapter.
Addendum: I really love Sweet Child O’ Mine, even recited the bassline and everything. So glad Miles is now broadcasting with Magnolia, as I’d listen to this DCR on repeat as opposed to the one actually in the game. I just love Miles in this story.