• Member Since 13th Sep, 2012
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Dragonrose Lovesong


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I am writing a come as you go fanfiction~doki
It won't make much sense, but come as you may like as I twist what you think you know about your favourite mlp fim characters.~doki
Don't expect to be able to follow because once you think you know wants going to happen next a past might make you soon forget.~doki
Expect the tags to change sometimes~doki

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 5 )
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...Forgive me if this comes across as negative; I have no intention of discouraging you~1/2heartbeat. Write what you want ~1/2heartbeat.

But I just read this, and the entire time, the only thing going through my mind was this ~1/2heartbeat:
"Why?" ~1/2heartbeat
What is the point of writing a story that is intentionally difficult to follow ~1/2heartbeat? I mean, if it was apparent there was a point behind it, if there were some hidden meaning, then I would be calling it brilliant ~1/2heartbeat. But I don't see any evidence of that~1/2heartbeat.

I dunno ~1/2heartbeat. Just seems pointless to me ~1/2heartbeat. And a little annoying ~1/2heartbeat.

Have a pleasant day ~1/2heartbeat.

(Also, it's spelled 'Phenomena' ~1/2heartbeat. Unless that was a pun ~1/2heartbeat. But even still, capitalize your title properly ~1/2heartbeat.)

Why do you keep saying "~doki"? Is it your catch phrase or something?

7936212 Of course ~doki
Too much anime ~doki

7935935 sorry I just can't spell~doki
:heart:dokidoki:heart: thanks for commenting~doki
I will say that it probably won't be hard to follow because all my thoughts seem to go in a circle, I meant my thinking is messed up enough to keep you on your toes cause I won't follow a traditional stereotype~doki
I'm writing with no end gold, so that I don't lose interest trying to make the end meet the start~doki

7935935
I just realised that you translated my tic~doki
Well played good sir~doki

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