Sunset sighed, looking at the two dresses Rarity prepared for her. Right now she was standing inside the Boutique, which Rarity’s parents owned with two mannequins in front of her, which wore the dresses. One was an elegant white dress with golden outlines and a necklace in form of her cutie mark. Additionally Rarity had prepared a pair of golden stilettos. It was open on the backside and finally Rarity even prepared a crown! Though, this item was at least optional. Ever since Sunset had explained the concept of alicorns being princesses in Equestria, Rarity had been a little bit obsessed, especially since Sunset transformed into the human equivalent of an alicorn.
Shaking her head, Sunset looked at the other dress. This one had a bit more cleavage and was black. It came additionally with a pair of dark, violette opera gloves, stockings, darker versions of her original boots, still with the purple “stains”, a violet colored skirt, cut in flower pattern and as a little touch it came with a belt with her cutie mark in the middle.
“Hmm, dunno. The first one looks too elegant. I mean it’s not like we’re going to a super expensive restaurant. On the other hand, the black one just seems way too complicated.”
“I think you should wear the white one. It is simple, yet elegant. Maybe we should ask Rarity if she made some gloves for this one too. It would certainly complete the picture.”
“Oh, gimme a break. If anything we should take the black one. But tell Rarity to get rid of the skirt. How’s Twilight supposed to be stunned, if she can’t even see our legs?”
Rolling her eyes, Sunset turned around and looked straight into two mirrors. Instead of showing her normal reflections however, the right one showed her demonic self from the fall formal and the other one her angelic self from the friendship games.
“I could now comment how stereotypical your choices are, but how about you two actually keep your promise and be quiet for the night?” the girl huffed. “Seriously, this is my first real date and the last thing I need are two voices constantly bickering inside my head.”
“Oh, come on! Let us at least chime in with your dress choice. But seriously, you need to show Twilight some skin. After that, she is as good as yours.” Sundown, as the girl had dubbed her demonic self grinned, while rubbing her hands.
Daydream, as Sunset called her angelic self, crossed her arms.
“This isn’t about getting Twilight into bed. Also according to your logic, the white dress would be the better choice.”
“No, all Rarity needs to do is to cut off the skirt and give us some new shoes. BAM!” Sundown slammed her fist into her palm. “Sexy lady right there.”
“This isn’t necessarily a good thing. Twilight might be overwhelmed by our “sexiness” as you like to put it. Maybe we should go for something a little more modest. We still have the time, Rarity might have a spare dress we could wear.” Daydream pointed out.
“Heck, yeah that’s right! I think I saw a dress earlier that’s just perfect!”
“The second one to the left in the women's section? The one with the huge cleavage, where one strong gust of wind could reveal our underwear?” Daydream deadpanned.
Sundown rolled her eyes. “Now you’re exaggerating. It covers more than enough. What do you think I am, a slut?”
“Luckily or rather unfortunately, we’re both a part of the same person, so I know that you’re not that bad.” Daydream stated in a cool, calm demeanor.
“Unfortunately?!” Sundown shouted. “Without me, this mare would have long ago ended up in the trashcan these humans call orphanage! She would have never started to fight back! Hell, she would be dead at this point!”
“Oh please. The only thing you did was complicating her life. Her friends were more than enough help to get through these troublesome times.”
“Friends? Help? Yeah right, just like they “helped” last Hearts Warming-”
“ENOUGH!” Sunset shouted on top of her lungs. The real girl looked angrily at both of her other selves. “I’m sick and tired of you two bickering every day already! Now, if you both would mind to SHUT THE FUCK UP FOR JUST ONE CELESTIA DAMNED EVENING!! Seriously, do you know how weird it is hearing two voices in your head?! Who am I, Deadpool?! Now, I’m gonna take the white dress. It is both elegant and sexy. Now are you both satisfied? No?, I don’t care.” Sunset glared at her demonic self, who was about to protest but stopped.
“So, I’m gonna change and then I’m going to the date. And unless I specifically ask you something, you two keep traps shut until tomorrow or else, we’re going on a rollercoaster ride. Understood?” she asked in a sick, sweetly tone.
Both Daydream and Sundown gulped at the threat. Being inside their true selves head had one big disadvantage. When something happened to their hosts head, they were the ones it had the strongest effect on. It came to light last month, when a theme park came to town and Sunset was dared by Rainbow Dash to ride the rollercoaster. It had not been a pleasant experience for neither the shoulder angel, nor the shoulder demon. They shuddered at what would happen to them if Sunset would take medications for whatever psychological condition the two could be called.
“Finally.” Sunset grumbled, taking the white dress and going to the changing room. Just as she was done, Rarity came downstairs, looking worried.
“Are you alright dear? I thought I heard you screaming…”
“Uh…” Sunset scratched the back of her head. “Internal debate. You know, I’m a little nervous and all that stuff. This is my first real date after all. How do I look?” Sunset turned around, in order for Rarity to get a full look at it.
“Simply put, beautiful my dear. Now then, Twilight called about ten minutes ago. She should be here any minute.”
The entrance bell chimed as she said this.
“Speaking of Discord…”
The two girls turned around and gasped for air. Twilight simply wore a dark purple dress, with a light violet star in the middle. The star was partially covered by a black heart, which ended in an arrow pointing downwards. The lower part of the dress was a very dark purple. Instead of wearing her hair in a bun, she had let it loose. She also wore some makeup, turned her glasses in for contacts and had black stilettos on. Now that in itself Sunset had kinda expected (not really, but it had been a reasonably possibility). What the girl didn’t expect was how much skin Twilight showed. Sunset caught herself staring at Twilight’s cleavage more than was appropriate and the point where the dress ended, appeared to be just within a reasonable amount.
Twilight herself started to blush, noticing the stares she was getting and looked to the side.
“See? I told you it would work.”
Lol.
Nice story. So there is going to be a story for Twilight then
7260396 Later, am still thinking of the concept.
I really enjoyed this plus I got a few good laughs out of it as well.
I wonder what would happen if the voices in their heads were somehow able to communicate with one another.
7260762 Mind sex? Kinda like phone sex, I guess....
7260767..... Well that's one possible outcome I guess.
Nice ending.
7260876 It was an obvious choice if I'm honest.
What's kinda scary is the realization that Sunset has both an angel and demon, so she's balanced, while Twilight only has the demon.
That's... kind of terrifying actually...
7260994 http://www.fimfiction.net/manage_user/messages/8877089
7261304 No thanks. Not interested.
7261103 Twi's also kinda her own angel to a degree. She's very straightforward and analytical. In that scenario the addition of peer pressure (demonic or otherwise) from someone of her same intellectual level should in fact help her act like a normal person.
After a total shit day and dealing with one to many frustrations lately, it was really nice to read something like this. It was really funny and cute at the same time and just what I needed to lift my spirits, so thanks for this AWESOME story!
Oh no, did I just channel Rainbow Dash!?
Oh well have a fave and like.
I knew taking all that high-powered magic to the brain can't be good for you. And now she's got schizophrenia and hears voices. So tragic.
7267154 You know, now that you put it that way, I want some of that stuff! The only voice I hear is the one humming the Tetris Theme.
7267233
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SsB3IfttE50
There you go. You'll never be able to not hear that voice. Nananananana...
Okay, this is the funniest rendition of DID!Sunsetr that I've ever seen; given that the subject matter should be tragic and not funny, this says a lot for your ability to write comedy!
7269260 I didn't add a comedy tag. Was kinda afraid to do so...
Are you going to make a sequel to this or another chapter because this concept is amazing and I love it
7310358 Thinking about it. Got an idea, but no time to properly work on it.
sequel sequel sequel *summons 100000000000s pinkie pies to chant with me* sequel sequel sequel
Dunno if Twilight has a shoulder angel, but Sunset with a shoulder angel and shoulder devil reminded me of Kronk.
funny thing is...I can totally see Sunset having an internal battle with her past and current self xD Sequel please...maybe where Twilight is having a internal conflict with her geeky modest side and the Midnight Sparkle side of herself? Laughed the entire way through reading this
7310391 if you'd like some help brainstorming and such id be more than happy to help :P
7348594 I'll start writing today or tomorrow. It's gonna be three chapters at most, but I hope to make it another one shot. Spoilers: the tone will be a little more serious.
7260433 FUCKING GOD MAN!
If not for your hella slow updates, I would follow you. In fact Iwill Love your ideas!
7385452 Urrgh, sorry. I have a video game and coke addiction to deal with...
7385656 Just try man!
HA! Was Midnight talking to Sci-Twi? That was practically awesome!
Oh, that ending though. Brilliant!
Nice names for Sunset's Alternate self's
Sundown And Daydream
I found this to be rather creative, and I loved the names you chose for Sunset's other selves. But if I'm being perfectly honest, it was that ending that made the entire story.
That ending
This is a fun idea that could actually be a full-fledged series.