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So the Silent Hunter has been found.... but he's only one of 5....
heheheheheh
dis gonna be good ![:eeyup:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/eeyup.png)
I thought this was in Absolutely Disgusting. Or am I thinking Rage Reviews?
So I am guessing Luna and celestias mom is the Fausticorn
So basically he is quiet from MGS V![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
Nice...
...it was worth the wait.
Like snake eyes he is mute and deathly.
it's the quit ones you have to worry about![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
7277639 I don't know, but what did you think of this?
7277735 Nice.
ehm, pardon??
I don't think sliver-ish is a color....![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
idk... just didn't look to be right, atleast to me...
Also might be good to check the last part since it seems like something is missing
7278555 Can you point it out, please?
7278418 Your OCs are unlikable Marty Stus, your butchering of characterization isn't the worst but still pretty bad, and the premise is the same power fantasy circlejerk the fandom expects from the displaced "genre". Overall 3/10.
7278559 eh, sorry but i really need to start sleeping... its like 2 am here...*yawn*![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
The part i'm talking of starts when they clear the room where the hunter is and is basically the whole section. A few lines just stung my eye and don't approve with my head for some reason. Might be because im too damn tired as of now...
Toodles, Inferno, im off to la la land...![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
Time to get some sleep....
BEST STORY 11/10 "would read again"
Hi you should add this in there
"Welp looks like we're....... DOOMED"
XDDDDDD
See what i did there
( Dear god what have i done kill me plz)
7278935 No, you deserve a slap on the wrist for that terrible, terrible pun. Now go sit in the corner.![:ajbemused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajbemused.png)
7279029 Okay......
*sits in corrner of room and thinks about life*
But good story keep it up good sir!!!!!!
Now you got me wondering, what if the Collateral Damage is the goofy one, he always end up being blown or shoot but never dieying?
7279771 Trust me, one or two of them is the goofy one, but it's not Collateral Damage. Not by a long shot.
Please tell me at least one of the doom marines use a kunai
7294045 Hm... I'm not sure which one it is. But why do you wish for one of them to have a Kunai?
7294172 cause they are really cool blades...and are very easy to conceal
7279186 thinks about life then asks some one to kill him again.
Ok, I did not expect:
1. Bryan to act reasonable to the Mane 6 about their problems with Celestia, instead of just, I dunno, calling her a bitch and saying they should dumb her.
2. The insinuation that Blueblood may have had some dark motives or involvement.
3. Luna's guard to be all female.
4. Having Barb instead of Spike. Also, who was the blue dragon?
7317306 Okay, rundown of the chapter...
1: Bryan's distrust and hatred towards Celestia, is his alone. The girls are in a bit of a struggle and somewhat lost. So, all he's trying to do is give them some pointers and finding out what they feel.
2: That would be spoilers if I told you.
3: Yes, because all we see from Celestia's Guard is males. At least to me.
4: You sure you didn't misread that? Both Spike and Barbs are in it.
I'm thinking of The Meta from Red vs Blue, he is and I quote
Underwater changelings, nice.
7679874
Dam straight lad... dam straight
I remember this story being a lot better. As I'm rereading it, I'm finding it needs serious editing.
Clever... So Blueblood was replaced.
Clever!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Nice! Two Doom Marines!
Sooo... Did Celestia backstabed all Marines?