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There seems to be a bit of a bold issue in this chapter...
starts right about here:
otherwise, Good Chapter!
7269076 Fixed, and thank you.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Celestia was thrown into the idiot mine field a lot...
Still, that was discussed and over with.
Nice chapter.
I know my reaction of digging a trench is appropriate considering their reaction at hearing his title.
7269122 Thanks. Although, how will Bryan react to hearing the city's name? And how will the entire city react to him, even with the princess there?
sadly, i see nothing redeeming about this sunbutt.
motives aside, she is most likely gun die horribly later on.
7269165 Oh, don't be so negative about it! You're bumming me out...
7269138 You tell me.
7269182 Bryan; possibly gonna get pissed. Maybe not. The city; the gangs there better not try anything with him, unless they want to lose a limb.
Can I ask when the next chapter is?
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Why do I get the vibe the Hunter was an MLP fan? or at least knew a good deal of the cannon series? Would explain a few things, things he MIGHT have freaked Celestia out about...not sure.
Also, I do not like this Sunbutt either, you'll need to do some serious character building and redemption stuff to get her even on PAR with a OC pony let alone background pony in terms of liking her again. And let me tell ya, that should show how much I dislike her actions, reasons and fear be DAMNED that shit was too cold.
Celestia was treated exactly the right tempature.
Geez, talk about over reacting....
When?
I would like to point out that Celestia does have a point. Bryan did just kinda murder Blueblood over nothing more than him being irritating.
Who's to say that they would have turned on the ponies of Equestria after they ran out demons to kill? Bryan seems ever-so-ready to murder people at the drop of a hat over trivial things.
Oh man, this is getting good. But I still don't like how everyone is thinking of blueblood, sure he was an ass but I think he would've been traumatized from the battle. I see him in a corner, silently taking all the hate he knows he deserves.
That's just my two cents.![:eeyup:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/eeyup.png)
7269789 Your point?
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was never my intent.
but then, you haven't given us a reason to like her.
sorry.
7270640 Bryan just executed somepony who did nothing to deserve it, and only Twilight objected to this.
Celestia presented valid reasons to fear the Doom Marines, and was dismissed. Treated like she was the bad guy. What she did may not have been 'good,' but so far I have seen no reason to think that she was 'wrong.'
I want these 'heroes' to see what Celestia saw. I want them to feel the fear she so rightfully felt of these Doom Marines. I want her reasons to be right.
I have no sympathy for these 'heroes.'
7270762 Why should they? It's not like they had a choice, they just did what was necessary. It matters not what others say of them, they'll keep doing what they have to do, even if that means becoming monsters.
7270740 I know. But give it time.
7270796 Probably should have been more specific, I'm talking about the ponies, not the Doomguys.
7270814 Oh, them. Well, don't expect Luna and Chrysalis to change, because reasons. But the ponies, well, they will be tested. They'll see why Tia fears them, but they'll also see the efficiency of the Doom Marines, even if it is excessive. So, even though they're gonna have a tough time trust Tia again, they're gonna have an even tougher time coping with some of the Doom Marines. Bryan being one of them.
7269789 because they arn't mindless animals. They can resist killing urges if needed.
7270836 There's still also the whole 'murdering someone in cold blood' bit that he got nothing but a pat on the back for.
7269679 Smoked to perfection.
7270855 Well, war tends to do stuff with your mind. Especially, when you've been fighting Demons.
7270852 Sure as hell didn't resist the urge to kill Blueblood. Kinda want to see actual, real consequences for that.
7270895 I'm not talking about him. I'm talking about everyone else's reaction to what he did. As in, apart from Twilight, how approving they were of it.
7271095 They're still at war, there are more pressing matters, than listening to the useless wails of a whining bitch.
Legitdestruction I agree 28th you all the way like a smoked Turkey.
I agree with you all the way!
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7271114 This would work...if we were dealing with tyrants.
Seeing as how we aren't, no, it doesn't fly.
It breaks their characters beyond any form of reasonable suspension of disbelief. At the end of the day, the Mane 6 are civilians, not battle-hardened soldiers or, well, amoral psychopaths.
Blueblood may have been irritating, but he didn't deserve to die for it.
This right here breaks the story for me. You committed one of the greatest sins a writer could do: You made a Marty Stu. A male character that can do no wrong, and will forever be above the consequences of everything they do, no matter what it is.
7271182 Or did I?
7271204 Whether or not you did doesn't matter to me. Your other readers can find out in your future updates. I, for one, have lost interest in this story.
Good day.
Bryan isn't a Gary stu he has lost fights so he isn't.
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7271204
When is the next chap cuz im hyped!
7271331 Patience. I'm working on it.
7271372
K I'm sorry.
7271372
Because this the only good doom crossover.
7271382 Really? Wow.
7263258
Yeah look it up it's the only good one.
7271573 They're still alive, and I have plans for them. As for names, I haven't come up with any for them. How do you name Crystal Ponies?
7271585 well...name them what they do for the living before the war?
7271639 That's another thing, I'm not good at naming ponies. Any suggestions?
7271672 ok what do they look like?
7271679 The stallion: Dark brown. Sliver mane and tail. Purple eyes. Mildly fit in body.
The mare: Golden yellow. Two-toned colouring; white and pink, for the mane and tail. Baby blue eyes. Lean and beautiful in body.
7271694 ok I let you know what to name them some days.
7271698 Thank you.
I like how you're portraying Celestia as more three dimensional than the Xenophobic or stubborn versions some other displaced portray her as. I'm not saying it justifies what she did, but I like how you're showing she regrets it.
On the other hand, I agree with those who say that Blueblood's death was completely unjustified, as were the mostly positive reactions to it. Really, no one is completely in the right here.
Also, let me know when/if you start accepting crossovers.