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Arcanum Sword
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Arcanum Sword
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I believe you should add a description to this story, good sir or madam, but overall, pretty good
I was led here through your post on the Writer's group, seeing how you said you were working on a Zelda fic. So far I very much like what I see. Good grammar, prose and pacing. Not what I'd usually expect of a novice writer. Take a well-earned like and fave. I look forward to see where this story takes us.
Alright, so I've just finished the second chapter and again, I like what I'm seeing. You got potential as a writer but all the same, it's becoming clear why your story is doing rather poorly.
If you're okay with it, I could help you understand and maybe address these issues.
7159300 Sure, I'd appreciate your help if you're willing to give it. I really want to do well...
It's Hyrule, not Hayrule. ...Unless you did that on purpose. Did you do that on purpose? I'm not stupid, I'm really not sure.
7174922 Yes, I did that on purpose, since its ponified to begin with. Sort of like 'Trottingham' or 'Fillydelphia', if you get the drift.
7175093 Is link a Hylian or a pony? If it's the former then it should be Hyrule not Hayrule.
7186788 This is based off of partially from the timeline where Link would have been triumphant, but vanished into legend, like how 'Wind Waker' explained it. "They waited for the Hero to save them--but he did not appear..."
And in this one he is indeed a pony, with the name 'Time Link'.
Now legends of the Hero do remain, but no one knows who his descendants are, if any exist. And like I told Starlight Nova, I put a 'twist' on it like most cities in Equestria seem to have, like 'Canterlot'--Camelot, if that makes sense. Sorta wanted to do something a little different than the norm.
7188363 I was just making sure
7189087 No problem bro
I think this story is great don't ever delete it alright?
Great Story Looking forward to seeing more Liked and Tracking and a Follow.
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?
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It will eventually, but Skyward's not going to be doing all of the work ;)
So far, I'm liking what I'm reading. Yes the pacing is odd, but it reads like an epic, the pacing is perfect I think. I do hope this gets updated though...
So underrated.
If only it updated...
It did! ASK and ye shall receive!
Hm, this shall prove interesting, come the Prince's confrontation with Skyward.
Great chapter!
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Thank you! It means a lot
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I did not know that! Thank you for telling me! Is there a way I can put this there now or not?
Another great chapter, I didn't expect Skyward x Trouble Hooves, but can't see anything but, any more.
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I was considering Blueblood or Braeburn, but I thought she might be better off with Trouble Shoes, considering Skyward hates stuck up ponies and Blueblood did insult her deceased mother. Braeburn's a nice stallion but unfortunately he has some bad habits of sneaking up on ponies and being a little too scatterbrained at times.
Thank you so much!
Surprised at the pairing?
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Well, I can't help but ship'em now!
Another great chapter.
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I'm glad you're enjoying this!
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Yeah, didn't think I'd enjoy an mlp - Legends of Zelda crossover... got nothing against LoZ... just not my thing. But in the case of this fic, well...
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All good!
I had this rolling around in my head for a bit after I got done watching "Appleloosa's Most Wanted' and then went to play LoZ: Twilight Princess soon after.
Oh... um...
And once again, Rarity shows a lack of respect for privacy on the matters of romance...
just, don't do that when they actually 'do it', Rarity... ya gotta give'em some privacy...
As always, a great chapter!
YES FINALLY I FOUND IT AGAIN *instant bookmark*