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This is gonna be good and funny thing time

...Thaaaaat's alot of fetish tags..

What does H/F mean?

Fall of Equestria?

9824626
This should be good

9823060
yeah, you could just put [WARNING HAS LOTS OF FETISH CLOP INVOLVED]

and could you put like a divider thing with a warning before and after the clop to separate the clop from the story so those that don't want to read it can skip over it

9825444
Hey, maybe you wouldn't be complaining if you actually bothered to read the description where it lists fetish tags. It's a simple rule, "don't like? Don't read."

9825589
ey not dissing just pointing it out

I personally like it

Will this story be something like Foxes of War?

I like it but I don't but I do
Ah how do I explain this oh I know I like the concept
Of nightmare moon coming back after 1000 years and finding ruins the rape I only like when my libedo is going at time of writing this it's not
And the Zelda tie in could use some work
but otherwise good

9825589
Telling someone to "Don't like? don't read." won't stop them from reading it and making their complaint, especially if its a critic or someone who goes around reading stories they believe are bad regardless of the rating.

9826473
Yeah, for the most part this story is written in full and going through editing so it will be posted regardless of the rating people will give or comments.

So John is now Joan and she has become a bimbo sl*t, the changelings might be following Cadence and the Caribou King is a god midget, I get all that right?

9833986
there's a lot more to come, this is only four out of hunderd and fourteen chapters or so.

9833993
So it all just needs editing huh, well I can't wait for more but I also can do nothing but wait.
Anyway, great story so far and the world seems interesting.

Is one of the voices Discord?

Also great story so far.

Getting even more interesting, nice bit of world building mixed with action at the same, time many find that hard to do.
Sex scenes are getting better as well.

Good chapters, like the look into the dream realm.

As always great chapters, great story.

It's nice to see little details added here and there.

So Carmine is related to the king. Well assuming Robin doesn’t get her memory fucked with she can finally get Luna or Harmonia to address the creepy sadistic eye ball she keeps seeing.

9833993
Please tell me there is more hyper impreg?

Love this chapter~

9920003
There's always hyper impregnation

this story just keeps geting better and better even with the charater development , But still wonder what paddy had seen in her mind

Great batch of chapters, love the little tidbits of important info sprinkled around the story, feels like an investigation what with the piecing together and speculation.

Robin seems to be more than she thinks she is what with the fairies, deku and goddesses interested in her.

I smell a dark tag coming.

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The dark tag has been there, waiting, almost unseen in the way it stalked the pages, waiting for the perfect moment to strike.

I’m gonna go masturbate with my new vines to thoughts of male Luna now.

I’m going to do the same but Futanari Luna

Kinda subdued reactions from all shown so far.

Wait, what do you mean FORMER Colonel?

What's H/F and H/H?

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female with a hermaphrodite, Hermaphrodite with hermaphrodite.

Is Washu from her own fic or was she made just for this chapter? Does chapter even affect the plot outside of making Robin experience a time skip?

“What is my life…?”

Sex, jokes, depression and Order

9960690
it's a slow payoff. bust Washu is what I call a Displace without a story. I'd use them for side characters to explain Displacement, and things that would not be known in story by protag.

Think of Washu and those like her that I use a 'Deities' teaching the 'hero', type thing.

Seems Washu owes Robin a few favors now.

This seemed like such a good story I was ok with the futas as I read an amazing story where the human race was at war with a new faction of females them being futas but the fucking gender twist of the main character ruined it. I hope you go on to make good stories but for me this ends here for I can’t stand when the main character is gender twisted at ALL. I am sorry but I end it here have a good one and continue writing.

So typo in the title or is there one from the upload batch missing? (Missing 36)

Ya wheres ch 36?

I might be wrong but was the fama thing a Vandread reference?

9970459
I have no idea what happened but I thought I plublished it, heh, my bad

this was good, great chapters

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