Meet Rachael. She's your average 12 year old human kid, loves adventure, hates school work, and will loves to explore! But she isn't your average kid. When ever she goes to sleep at night, she goes to the land of Equestria. She often goes on adventures with her best friend Twilight Sparkle, but one day an adventure goes HORRIBLY WRONG and Rachael hasn't been to Equestria sense. 10 years later, Rachael is all grown up and has just finished collage. Inspired by her adventures from when she was younger, she has become a novelist and is working on her first book. But one day, she bumps into a familiar face.
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Well it was an interesting read to say the least.
I do have a few things to say though in all seriousness as one author to another the plot seems interesting but, I felt that too little description was given on the location or even the backstory. I know it was simply a prologue and I did enjoy the dialogue between the characters but couldn't seem to overlook the devices missing in it to get me enthralled into the story. Please don't take my comments as an insult I am simply being honest because I believe this story has a lot of potential so please keep on writing and make a few corrections here and there as you see fit. 
Also if you could correct the few spelling errors in it as well, it would help keep the story going instead of leading off to a misunderstanding in the context. 