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Is she a pony accidentally turned into a changeling from being in the pod too long, or was he just covering her body?
7050255 He is spread thin all over her, shaping and coloring to look like a changeling
Chrysalis appears to have made a symbiote/klyntar like changeling to try and take revenge. So far Gel seems to be a mix of a ditto (great shapeshifting with a few or more tells) and the symbiotes like I mentioned (Biological armour). Looks like the beginning of a great partnership. A great start to what seems like a great story!
7050272 Thanks for clearing that up. I'll be waiting for more.
Geez, don't break the poor girl, Gel...
to apply pattern to - to apply patterns to
words can only be - words could only be
he continues to whisper - he continued to whisper
more of himself - more of himself inside
down now and poor - down now, and poor
going, however - going however
*****
It's an intriguing beginning to the story, I can only wait and see where it goes from here.
7051996 Your command is my wish, oh slayer of typos. Chapter 2 posted. Caution, there is a dark flag on this for a reason.
This first chapter has me very intrigued. Will definitely be reading this!
7065809 Glad to hear it, I am banging out a chapter or two each day at the moment, of this story. I have another that I do at a more sedate 1/day, but hay, when the words flow I let my fingers tap
Ooo I love this so far I can't wait to see what happens
7086811 Oh my, a new pony. Please, step this way, and don't mind the other ponies, Gel is taking care of them
Haha, "oops, I seem to have orgasmed the mind out of her..."
7139552 Oops I did it again...
Woah. ~hug
Its.
7197428 Thanks! I hope you are liking the story.
I just started reading this and I gotta say all those tags peaked my interest :3
Nice Start for the Story i Wonder where this is going
Is Gel going to get a shock when Pattern needs to pee or poop. "Pattern, you're leaking....something disgusting!"
It's not often I thumb up and favorite a story one chapter in, especially one this long (and it's still marked incomplete even!), but dear Luna you have earned this. Well done.
Chrysalis. You have made a pleasure changeling.
Ahh the changelings return, and in a new universe no less. Im surprised that some of the displacers and displaced have not noticed me yet. Intriguing,
Chrysalis you have outdone yourself with this new creation, i might go tell the alt-universe versions of you this information.
8682497 This Chrysalis is a much darker one than even the show. But with more spitting anger comes a ruthlessness that shocks even her own hive.
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Why is she more often than not, shown to be evil? And not just evil but cruel to a point that wouldn't benefit herself or her hive in anyway.
9063267 If you've read more of my stories, you'd see I have portrayed Chryssibug in a LOT of different styles. From benevolent ruler to this one, and all the shades in between.
A good example being:
- MLP: FiM
- Romance
- Adventure
- Drama
A young changeling queen—keeping herself hidden while she studies in Canterlot—comes to a conclusion: Celestia is mishandling the defense of ponykind.Un fichero cambiante para leer