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SEQUEL????
7061757 Maybe
didn't phase the changeling - didn't faze the changeling
there was a lot - there were a lot
and made her squirm - and making her squirm
*****
Well, that wound up faster than I was expecting, but in hindsight I keep having to remind myself that Chrysalis is powerful, but she's a mental midget when it comes to planning and tactics... and leadership in general. Fortunate for her that Sally, Sweet, Easy, and Sharp Mind's hive are far to the south and a universe away.
Overall I liked the story, the mature portions started off a little cool for me at first, but warmed up considerably once we learned more about Gel's character and his interaction with Princess Twilight.
P.S. I'm returning to Canterlot with the entire cadre of changelings from Chrysalis' hive. Do you think they'll all fit in the east wing guest rooms until we find them a permanent home?
XOXO Twilight Sparkle
Also - What happened to poor Fluttershy?
7062048 All typos fixed and yeah, I woke up today, my brain latching on to the fact that I had forgotten the meekest, most adorable pony
At least these changelings are not as overwhelmingly hungry as David has them. One changeling can quite happily live off one pony.
I am pondering ideas for a sequel, my love for changelings and Gel's particular breed of them is quite obvious by now, I would think
Poor Chrysalis. Never, ever underestimate the power of mirrorshades. Maybe the time-out in a pod will do her some good; she's always so grumpy!
This was cute, and a bit naughty, and I hope we get to see more of their adventures in the future.
Nice, good to have backup plans.
Now... Only one thing is bothering me about this chapter. What happened to the changeling that was on Chrshalis's head and what happened to the ring it made off with. Wondering mainly because a null ring that powerful is bound to be a future plot point later on. Speaking of later on, back to the story!
Chrysalis obviously, didn't read the evil overlord rules, or she would know not to monologue.
7160282 Reading rules? Ain't nopony got time for that!
that finally asked, "where is my pod?"
Lets get your friends out
with Rainbow Dash. yellow blur of wings
to blink the scroll to Spikes room
1. Forgot to capitalise.
2. Let's.
3. Forgot to capitalise.
4. Spike's.
I wish twilight would teach me some "lessons"...
What the? Oh, unload magic blocker ring from saddlbag onto Chryssis's horn, I see.....(Boulder climbs back into chair)
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Oh I think I suffer pacing whiplash
Es realista, es mejor que alargarlo innecesariamente
I keep wondering, if changeling mind control is so good, why haven't they taken over Equestria already?