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I had a feeling Twi and Gel would get closer to each other...
Gonna have to work out a solid defense against the Dark Gaze, those two.
Also, thanks a lot, Damaged, you've apparently triggered the latent 'living encasement' fetish I didn't know I had.
7055705 I believe they are well on the way to working out a way to protect against it further
Also, you are welcome
7055851 Anti-magic combat sunglasses!
hug she wanted - hug she had wanted
*****
Excellent work, the plot moves forward with a good balance of sadness, warmth and action. I'm not able to guess where you might be going with this, but it's fun reading along and finding out a chapter at a time.
I met a strange lady / she made me nervous. / She took me in and gave me breakfast.
...
Please forgive my silliness.
7055906 Silliness must never be forgiven, simply because it is welcomed
Thank you, as always, for the typo fixes. And what do you mean a chapter at a time, I just put up another
I do feel like they warmed up to the Gel a bit too quickly. Perhaps a bit more explanation as to how each of the characters are feeling might help ease them in.
stepped free of it's fellows
1. Its.
At least Gel has got... Twilight covered.
7200152 Thanks! But she sure did manage to get under his skin...
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ok so far this a pretty nice story
7390262 Thanks!
7390412 this is adorable, i cant even describe it
Sorry to disturb you BM, but this bugged(pun) my grammar radar a small bit, could this read 'What did you do-' & 'What did I do?' to me this feels better. If it is as you want, ignore my interruption.
edit: This was for chapter 3, for some reason lately fimfiction isn't placing chapter names at the top of some comments I've made!?!
This is a really cool idea, and you've got it playing out really well.
Also, armor form. When can I expect it?
7541684 Woops, replied in the latest chapter by mistake!
Stories to fast paced.
Not enough detail of the surrounding settings, stories good don't get me wrong, just needs a little bit more needs to be added to it.
Muy cortas y ritmo rĂ¡pido