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With that much metal, sooner or later, we must have Cmdr Twilly use the classic RoboCop line "Dead or alive, you're coming with me."
Excitement courses through my left pinkie toe and pupils, things just got interesting .
Shit just got damn interesting.
Why do I sense things are going to be more and more nuts from there?
When Rainbow wonders why Celestia and Luna would be escorts and having embedded gems...
7041464 I may, I should also point out some of the metal is bullet fragments that weren't removed.
7041728 cause we have a military maniac running around in an alternate Equestria where what she is used to doesn't exist and people will have no idea what she is talking about and we all know how the Commander likes to screw with people.
and yes I liked that scene as well.
I liked the whole scene with Commander Sparkle talking to them and confusing them.
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Except she'll be confused too, for a short moment at least.
7041919 yeah but she will probably recover faster then everyone else do to her experience with being dumped into another world as well as just being who she is.
7042088 Thank you.
7042096 that was a bit unintentional but still it works.
and the Interludes will follow what the EDF IS doing, mostly the Major, so we will see the bots more.
Hoo boy, things just got insane! Activating Tracking Beacon...
7041886 She might get mad seeing the ruins of Golden Oak and would be like. "When did that weird castle showed up?"
7041464 it wouldn't fit. the Commander is more like a mix of the Terminator and the Joker then Robocop.
I see her doing something more like this.
7042177 yes she totally would.
Room 308 is this a random number you picked or is it intentional as in .308 caliber
Chapter was a bit confusing at first but in the end I understood. Still a great fucking story!
Wait. What? I thought in the first story she became an alicorn.
Because, ya`know - It was an epilogue?
7099212 the epilogue took place fifty years in the future this takes place directly after the events of the last story
Damn this is meta. And you might want to fix the description a bit, it is really confusing and i just finished the first story too. Maybe add brief intro and mark it as tl;dr in the beginning.
Still this looks awesome.
This can only go well.
Isn't Soldier Twilight supposed to be an Alicorn? The last chapter in the previous book showed her ascending. Or is this in between before and after?
7490227 this is a few years after the war with Tirek so before she ascended
... her cutie mark was taken was it not? you know on both sides. unless i mistaken
7548793 only the right side cutie mark was taken, she still has the left.
7549523 thakes for clearing that up for me
No offence but this and the first chapter have been quite painful to read, you seriously need an editor.
But she lost her mark....
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She only lost one of her Cutie Marks.
shes jumped from higher
TWILIGHT, THE ALICORN ONE
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Cantelrot?
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Wow....I legit feel bad about that error.
I really need to stop being lazy and actually start cleaning these things up.
... yeah, as a bus driver.
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Ya that seems accurate enough.