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Yeah, she could've handled that better.
YES! A BASIS FOR MY IDEA WAS USED! Or he already had this planned, but i like to think i helped a bit.
What happened to The Dazzlings?
I'm guessing that Commander prefers to go guns blazing?
Honestly, this was the easiest and most effective way of handling the Sunset Shimmer problem.
Oh no... Not her, not Reaper!
Luna in Dreamscape...oh no.
CTS dreaming of a lab....OH CRAP!
A monotone CTS............OH FREAKING CRAP!
Starlight asked about what lead to her being friends with PTS..............SCOTTY! BEAM ME UP THIS PLANET IS GOING TO BLOW!
Small plot hole with Sunset. How did she get passed the bots?
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Commander Twilight does not meet Dazzlings.
7055554 that depends on what you idea was.
7055818 the bots were patrolling elsewere as the EDF doesn't have much presens in the empire city do to the crystal ponies already having lived udner a dictator ship having soldier all over would not be a good thing so the base is outside the city.
7055641 of course, soldier, how else do you handle a situation? espcilly when that is recoving the keys to a super weapon.
7055686 she has to hang out somewhere when not actively in control of the body. :rainbowlaugh
7055854 Well I figured the EDF would not be allowed in but i thought the bots were with her 24/7.
ANd you don't comment on the rest of my coment?
7055868 well they are but I figure Twi caught her just before making her escape thought he mirror.
and I loved the rest of it.
9mm hollow points ha that made me laugh
7055899 its entertaining watching 2015 police try to stop someone wearing military combat armor from the year 2037 with that ammo.
if not for it being CTS it probably would have worked.
7055500 NONSENSE SHE HANDLED THAT WITH MINIMAL ISSUES NO CIV CASUALTY ,OBJECTIVE OBTAINED, LITTLE RESISTANCE AND NO INJURY
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7055500 how else would a trained soldier handle recovering of a super weapons from a thief. if not for CTS not wanting to risk her soldiers do to not being familiar wit dimensional travel she'd have gone in with a small army.
7055946 oh yeah I already planned to cover sunset back in SoM but ran out of time, so I bumped it up here.
I do plan to do the mundane stuff though based on your suggestion.
It's a shame that the site doesn't have a feature for readers to add a separate "thumbs up" for enjoyed chapters.
7056008 I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter so much.
I think this is the point things start to get darker in the story as i've established the relationships between everyone.
7055615 it was said in the chaptr that she will eal with them at some point
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What Luna has seen in this nightmare... will be hard to stomach. Will she tell this to her sister?
7055818 XD
Arg! I am so fed up with the commanders god damn ego I wish some one (preferable twilight) would blast her acros the room already when she attaks some one instead of just siting there
I mean yes she is stronger and faster then a normal pony and has lots of combat experins but if it were celestia for example she would be fighting someone withe equal combat experins and the power of an ALACORN yes she has guns but that is not going to stop an angry celestia and speaking of that the commander literally tried to choke twilight in front of her and she was just like
Nah it's cool just try to kill my student fellow princess and freand in front of me is all good
Okey got that out of my sistom it's a really good story other wise and I can't wait to see what happens next
7058422 she was going to reprimand CTS for that but then CTS told them why she was angry and it was frankly justified, plus Celestia ahs to factor in the Commander just woke up from a major shock to her system by being torn from her own world and brought there and is still disoriented most likely.
i can guarantee if something like this happens in front of Celestia again things will happen and as for Twilight talking to CTS rather then attacking her was do to cannon PTS not really being the type to jump to violence right away and CTS did calm down before she ahd to.
I've been thinking, how would Commander Sparkle react if she met an alternate Twilight who would happen to be equally as badass, or maybe even more badass, than she is... In some existing fanfics we have "HALO armored and armed" Twilight, in others we have "W40K Inquisitor" Sparkle...
I haven't found fics yet (but maybe one day...) with Twi going Ghost in Starcraft, or, what the hay, taking the mantle of the Queen of Blades and ending up Xel Naga...
7059702 well she would either hit it off with them if they are good and spend a lot of time chatting with them if not sparing, if they were evil then she would probably bring the full might of the EDF down on them to neutralize the threat.
but overall she'd enjoy having some one of equal skill to chat with and spar with as there is only one person that can really beat her in combat in a one on one fight, granted she does love tossing soldiers around.
This is so mess up but like it XD more insane tactics please , this is the best fic i ever read be waiting for more chapters you sir gain a follower
7059717 How about the Twilight from Tataratsu's PWNY-verse? She loves blowing stuff up, probably a little too much XD or the Twilight from Into The Black: A Mare's Tale? Actually, the Commander would probably hit it off with Nightmare-Twi from ITB:AMT better, considering both have been through similar traumatic experiences, and war.
Rereading this and I become curious to the aftermath of CTS's mission in Canterlot High. Heck I kind of feel bad for huamn Twilight because she might have been arrested for it thinking she did it.
commander twilight sparkle school shooter confirmed 2016
Good that she didn't end up at Columbine.
At least she was effective.
7333800 no one was shot. School criminal vandalism and assault with deadly weapons. But not a shooter. No one died. So yay.
7521791 gotta feel sorry for sci-twi though she's gonna get blamed for it.
7802026 i literaly just thought of that just the now after several read throughs i was like huh sci twi is going to get some serious shit for this
Why doesn't CTS carry bits in her storage locker... Wait its CTS nevermind.
7169422 Sorry to bother, but can you Link the Fics you mentioned?
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When i last saw Human Twilight has NOT: Cybernetics, soldier armor, deadly weapons. And maybe there are witnesses for human Twilight.
Besides with the armor, helm and the cybernetics it would be very difficult to recognize Human Twilight in the Commander.
There are no proof against Human Twilight.
hahahaha that was fast, she wrecked her shit.
How EQG should have went.
About Starlight and Sunset.
While I understand why Commander Sparkle dealt with them the way she did in her world, with her being made more ruthless with all she'd been through, I think the Princess's way is more beneficial for everypony.
The Princess gained new friends and changed their life and those around them for the better, while the Commander only caused more suffering. Sunset and Starlight would now live their life, being good friends and helping the others, truly regretting their past misdoings, while in the Commander's world they will only get more bitter.
For example, if she'd been the way she is now when she first met her friends and found the Elements, she would have probably killed Nightmare Moon instead of reforming her, thus ridding Equestria of potential great princess and Celestia of her sister.
The Commander went through a lot of bad things, but she needs to learn to be more open minded again.
They are not horrified. They are just amazed how effective our Twilight is.
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let's consider what Starlight did shall we. she took over and founded a town. while on surface seems okay the simple fact she had a house designed to HOLD AND BRAINWASH ponies that stumbled upon her town and disagree with her ideals. Note she LEGALLY kidnapped a PRINCESS, you know a member of the RULING BODY of the nation and several other ponies against thier will. Just on twilight ALONE that is treason. Treason is a death sentence offense. Then we go to her revenge plot. How she got all this info and NOT notice what all the mane 6 did for the good of Equestria is confusing. but we see the resutls. ALL negative. the best is Celestia in a stalemate war with Sombra and even then Cadance is likely dead or a sex, maybe even sex slave for Sombra. Shining dead. Then we have Nightmare Moon which is a tyranny and no sun. Chrysalis was ending the last resistence to her changelings so all ponies are now in cocoons feeding them love until they die..then the changelings die for lack of food. and as the Commander mentioned one universe was an extinction level event. so EVERYBODY IS DEAD in one timeline. In any other nation or government Starlight would have been put to death for that. she is an extreme danger and even SEEING that extinction timeline she still wanted to keep going. Note, for all of that she gets no kind of punishment at all. Hence why so many cheered when Chrysalis refused her hoof in the next finale. it is so stupid on its face that she recieved no consequence for her actions at all. Luna lost 1000 years. Discord lost well over that. Sunset is in self exile. the rest are dead or stoned.
while Starlight has proven valuable it's still stupid and could have backfired. so the Commander is fully justified in her reaction.
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My personal reason I don`t like Starlight (Besides the fact she somehow overpowered Twilight[who was the most powerful Unicorn before turning into an Alicorn]) was I seen her as nothing more than another Twilight Clone.
Trixie- If Twilight became more self-absorbed
Moondancer- If Twilight remained a anti-social bookworm
Sunset- If Twilight was more power hungry
Starlight- If Twilight believed Equality is more important than self-identity
Tempest: If Twilight was the soldier(NOT a Royal Guard) while Shining Armor is the Bookworm
I was about to cry out, "Please no not Shimmy!" XD
Ok this was pretty funny.