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So that's what happened to Shining... He will not be forgotten...
A moment of silence for Shinning Armor.
dear god that music is haunting
God bless you, Shining.
Now this chapter carries deep emotions... After the sad, it's good to go on something light and funny.
i really like this style of writing and you did it perfectly
The feels are strong in this chapter.
Also, how the hell did the Griffons get their claws on that much advanced military tech? You would think CTS would do whatever it takes to ensure that technology stays in Equestrian hooves.
I don't care that you blew them up I will forever ship Sunny Days x Kebab-ling and demand compensation for introducing me to this ship and then quite litterly blowing it up.
I love the way you told the story in reverse chonological order. It delivered the emotional blow for CTS (and us for that matter) last and it was well build up. And it didn't even end with the punch to the guts but instead gave us CTS grieving as a finish.
This chapter I just love it. Very well done.
Just one teeny-tiny little bit:
Those two imply the first bit of the chapter happend BEFORE the second which is obviously not the case. You should probably switch those two time stamps. Other than that, with the time stamps and all, again, really well done.
Also those slices of life with Sunny Days and Shining+Cadence really hammered the point home, how lifes were annihilated not just numbers of victims thrown at us. That is how you write something like that well.
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The saddest moment of every two fic until now
Poor everyone who these fuckheads killed in their terrorist attacks.
I like that is clear it was just a rogue faction. Many authors tend to write all griffons as insanely militaristic and ruthless, while here it's clear that the majority, including the king, have no problem living peacefully.
You know...most would be worried that she trusts the changelings more. Me? I’m surprised no one else has figured it out earlier.
I agree with you. Going in reverse order just seemed like the right thing to do.
Twilight is an edgy and grossly over exaggerated caricature of a psychopath and a soldier. And generally just exceedingly out of character. I enjoy the story but it smacks of the violence worshipping from "The Punisher". Even in a rebel army it feels like she wouldn't be second in command due to her rather unstable mental status. And she's rather 'murricanized what with her worship of humans and guns. Interesting story.
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There's a reason for Twilight being the way she is. War changes people for the worst.
"What the hell is going on out there?!"
You did not just insert an Opposing Force reference! :D I thought the Freeman referenced in the previous one was a poke, but this just proves it.
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I wondered when some one would realize that is a referance.
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For most authors, they have the thinking mentality of like ~"Well something other then the changelings need to be evil and such, so why not the Gryphons."~
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maybe you should have read Soldier of magic, you know the FIRST story of the series
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You missed the rather obvious "this story is a sequel to _______" in the description.
I to like guns and books, but I also like games although I think that might be obvious.
Uhhhh, I disagree, I think a sword or spear would be more brutal especially for those who isn't a unicorn as it would be harder to kill with them and the opponent would die very painfully, but with a gun it can kill far easier making the death faster and less painful.
You got to be freaking kidding me.....do she never tell them or did they forget?
Ya I'm not surprised.
I was wondering when we would see the death of Shining since the mentioned it in the previous story. Cadance probably would have survived due to Allicorn biology and I believe they have tougher skin so the bullets wouldn't be able to hit anything important.
I also wanted to ask, has her birthday changed? Y'know since she was in another dimension for 6 months while it's only been 2 months in her home dimension.