A little predictable, but it earned a "d'awww" and a smile from me anyway. I liked it.

“What do you mean it’s my fault?! Anon is a monster!”

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This monkey’s dick wrecked your sloppy loose horse pussy! Shit! I could swear that it was like tossing a hotdog down a hallway!”

OooooooohhhhHHHH!

Small?! Keep this in mind you fucking cunt. Stallions only last a fraction of my stamina. So how many dicks have you been taking to get that loose?

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I liked that. Vulgar and sad that Lyra is the Villian, she is one of my favorites, but so is Bonny.

Could of ended here but is that another chapter I see?

Lyre can be confused for liar.

It happens.

Only thing that really bothers me about this chapter is that Anon seemed to immediately hate Lyra once he found out. No confusion, denial, sadness, just pure hatred. Still, loved it and can't wait to read the next chapter

7057304 It's mentioned later on that he was suspicious, no? It was even implied in the beginning when he says that the letters were becoming fewer and fewer. I would think he already had doubts. What he heard just confirms and cements it.

Princess that isn’t nesse

It's spelled "necessary".

You should’ve kept you cool, Anon

*your cool

7057428 you do know the first one was intentional?

7057304 what is there to deny or be confused about? he heard it straight from the horse's mouth

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Seems in line with how some people handle betrayal. I didn't think it was that unusual.

Buck you, Lyra!!!

“I said you’re the problem you backstabbing cum guzzling whorse!”
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7057870 anger and hate are simpler less confusing and familiar emotions compounding onto the who prdetor thing a human is more likely to get express anger and then later confusion and sadness.

I liked the chapter, but I kind of felt that some of the anger on Anons part was a bit...forced. Maybe it is just his abrasive nature in general, but I felt he would have been more confused about what Lyra said to Bon-Bon rather than just straight out anger, at least at first. I mean their conversation went from 0 up to 11 in a short amount of time. Also using Celestia as a literal "get out of jail free" card was slightly cringy, but you at least made him face some consequences for his actions, even if that just ended up with someone else getting maimed heh.

All in all though I enjoyed it.

Holy hell this chapter was spicy! Man, let me start off by saying i love the personalities of every single character in this fic. Mostly bon bon and lyra's. I love how you weren't afraid of making her the "bad guy" in the story and gave her your own personality. That's the thing i love about background ponies, not much is known about them and thus they are more malleable and have more room to work with without people jumping and saying that's out of character.

The pacing is great and the budding romance doesnt feel too rushed as well as the personality growth from the first chapter.

“Small?! Keep this in mind you fucking cunt. Stallions only last a fraction of my stamina. So how many dicks have you been taking to get that loose?”

I... never have seen the fiction makes lyra THIS bitch
Nice work...... do you really reaaaly hate Lyra?

Ugh, i was expecting threesome, but, yes, it would be kinda boring.

This monkey’s dick wrecked your sloppy loose horse pussy! Shit! I could swear that it was like tossing a hotdog down a hallway!”

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woot!

“Mom, I’m home!”

SHITSHITSHITSHITFUCKINGSHITFUCKSHITSHIT

The both of them quickly set off to make sure everything is ready for the party. It’s rather odd for either of them to come to terms with what happened. It just felt so natural and even as they work on setting up the party it’s as if nothing has changed between them. They work in tandem as if they’re one and the embarrassment they felt before didn’t last long. In a weird way, it’s as if they were dating the entire time.

The most idealistic and best way for a romantic couple to go through.

I did enjoy the calm before the storm, the escalating tension, and the climax towards the end. And considering how far they have gone, it is rather sweet to Anon and Bon Bon going from hating each other to loving each other. Bring a huge smile on my face.

Lyra you whorse!

the reference would be lost in translation, buuuuut...
https://youtu.be/KvaRhUHJViI?t=2m28s

it'd be lost in translation, buuuut...
https://youtu.be/KvaRhUHJViI?t=2m28s

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This was exactly what came to mind!
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I've never seen Lyra been made the villain in such a way before. She's the kind of person in this fic that I wish would die in a fire, and not from the smoke.
Knowing what it feels like to get just a small patch of skin burned in the literal sense I rarely wish that kind of doom on anyone.

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I know right she a tramp and needs to die

There so god damn DENSE in the beginning

The real Lyra we all know and love would never do shit like that. Thats why I'm liking this story but not favoring it. Still a good read, though. I just wish the antagonist was some pony else instead of lyra heartstrings.

First time seeing Lyra portrayed as the villain...was interesting to say the less.

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least*

D'awww. Normally I'm a big Lyra fan, but within the context of your story she was very easy to make the antagonist.

I may have been hoping for a herd though...