Scootaloo blames herself for the incident. Nopony seems to be able to change her mind, not even her best friends. And to make matters worse, the happy façade is slipping as the Mane 5 struggle to keep their emotions in check and stay smiling while their best friend is in a critical condition. Is there any hope for Rainbow, Scootaloo or the Mane 5?
Wow I need more!
Gonna update soon?
Wow.
This is intense.
AND I LOVE IT!
WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING OUT?
6985635 Hopefully soon! I'm glad you like it
6983921 You'll get more! (Hopefully soon )
Spacing man. You need to freaking space it make it so much easier to read this.
6996888 Yeah I know
6998868 Then why don't you space?
6998873 I'm not sure. I just tend to write my story like that. But I can change it to make it easier to read
6999016 You'd get less down votes form the grammar nazis
6999024 Sweet Celestia
6999032 What?
6999035 The grammar Nazis are gonna hunt me down
6999041
6999046 I have to run. I WILL UPDATE SOON. Hopefully they won't catch me.
6999051 Don't forget to space!
OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! OH, HOLY ST, SHE DEAD!!! OH, SHE DEAD FOR SURE!!!
Awesome! Keep on goin'!
7371474 Thank you! I will