• Member Since 8th Feb, 2016
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TheLunaRainbow


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Scootaloo blames herself for the incident. Nopony seems to be able to change her mind, not even her best friends. And to make matters worse, the happy façade is slipping as the Mane 5 struggle to keep their emotions in check and stay smiling while their best friend is in a critical condition. Is there any hope for Rainbow, Scootaloo or the Mane 5?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 19 )

Wow I need more! :twilightoops:

Gonna update soon?

Wow.
This is intense.
AND I LOVE IT!
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING OUT? :twilightsmile:

6985635 Hopefully soon! I'm glad you like it :twilightsmile:

6983921 You'll get more! (Hopefully soon :twilightsheepish:)

Spacing man. You need to freaking space it make it so much easier to read this.

6998868 Then why don't you space?

6998873 I'm not sure. I just tend to write my story like that. But I can change it to make it easier to read :pinkiesmile:

6999016 You'd get less down votes form the grammar nazis

6999035 The grammar Nazis are gonna hunt me down :pinkiegasp:

6999046 I have to run. I WILL UPDATE SOON. Hopefully they won't catch me. :raritydespair:

OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! OH, HOLY S:yay:T, SHE DEAD!!! OH, SHE DEAD FOR SURE!!!

Awesome! Keep on goin'!

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